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Post by Spookster on Tue Jun 17, 2014 3:21 am

Hey all! I thought about making a story about a character I made up!
So here's my Prologue. I still need a name for the Queen her right hand man so suggestions are welcome!  Very Happy  Now without further talk the story starts...

-x- The curse of the temple -x-

Long ago in a land far far away, was a land where big and small people lived.
How was this possible? No one knows though one thing was certain: The kingdom was ruled by iron fist.

The kingdom was ruled by the great Zardenia Illambris who was corrupted by her own will.
The people of the land were in love with the queen, who herself commanded her slaves do her bidding.

Zardenia herself lived in a great big castle ruling the world from her throne.

However one man resisted her fist and wanted to save everyone's live by defeating the queen.
The man headed to the pyramid where the queen was at the moment… With his weapons hidden…
"Let me enter, her grace is awaiting me" The man said to the guard.

"Hold it! Her grace is busy and doesn't want visitors! leave!" The guards told the man.

Being dissapointed… The assassin ran tot he town hall… When he reached the town hall
he saw that all the guard were going outside the pyramid where the queen was... Was it because those guards at the entrance warned the others?

The man dug a tunnel straight tot he pyramid! And entered it from there! He ran downstairs to the grave where Zardenia Illambris was.

You there! You are not allowed to be here!! leave now or you will break the ritual! The queen said.

The man had no idea what to do and threw his sword right at the queen.

The sword flew trough the air.. And hit the queen… "You... You killed her! You monster!" The desert general said. “With my powers! I will banish you! Now!” "None will enter this crypt now! I shall finish this! HE WILL BE REBORN!!!"


"Okay kids enough bed time story time!" Dad said.

"But dad I want more!" "yeah me too!' The kids said

"Oh you kids are really addicted to this story aren’t you two?" he said with a big smile "You have to go to school tomorrow! Tomorrow I’ll tell more about the history of our town! Good night!”



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Chapters...
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Re: -x- The curse of the Temple -x- Prologue

Post by The_Glitch on Tue Jun 17, 2014 7:15 am

Awesome, May I be in the story (I'm asking because I was in the rp :3)
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Post by Turn999 on Tue Jun 17, 2014 7:59 am

I'm in too cause I was in this rp too
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Post by Raddaman8000 on Tue Jun 17, 2014 8:58 am

I guess you can throw me in as a secondary character -- I'm not all that important, even though I was in the rp as well. Razz 
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Post by Jams on Tue Jun 17, 2014 1:05 pm

Stories! Yay! Jammy in! Even though Im not sure what Rp these guys are on about.

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Post by Spookster on Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:39 pm

Jammy wrote:Stories! Yay! Jammy in! Even though Im not sure what Rp these guys are on about.

They were in a small Rp which involved Zardenia too

But if your in...

Are you willing to give me permission to write anything? or are there things I need to keep in mind  Smile

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Post by Spookster on Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:39 pm

Raddaman8000 wrote:I guess you can throw me in as a secondary character -- I'm not all that important, even though I was in the rp as well. Razz 

Are you willing to give me permission to write anything? or are there things I need to keep in mind  Smile

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Post by Spookster on Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:39 pm

Turn999 wrote:I'm in too cause I was in this rp too

Are you willing to give me permission to write anything? or are there things I need to keep in mind Smile

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Post by Spookster on Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:40 pm

Audrey wrote:Awesome, May I be in the story (I'm asking because I was in the rp :3)

Awesome I already have your anwser... I have something planned for your character already!  Very Happy 

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Post by Haasman29 on Tue Jun 17, 2014 5:49 pm

Shall I join in this joyous misadventure? I think yes!
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Post by connorcreeper14 on Tue Jun 17, 2014 6:38 pm

I guess I would Like to be in on this story thingy as myrandom size chaging Rp Guy
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Post by Raddaman8000 on Tue Jun 17, 2014 8:47 pm

HappySpookster wrote:
Raddaman8000 wrote:I guess you can throw me in as a secondary character -- I'm not all that important, even though I was in the rp as well. Razz 

Are you willing to give me permission to write anything? or are there things I need to keep in mind  Smile

Yea, you can do whatever you want with me. I would prefer to remain secondary, like comedy relief, but whether you do or not is completely up to you.  Very Happy 
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Post by Flammole on Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:29 pm

I don't care where, but just put a cat in there. Every story needs a cat. .w.

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Re: -x- The curse of the Temple -x- Prologue

Post by Spookster on Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:53 am

Notice!

This is NOT a Rp nor will I write about your Rp character (though a tiny bit is always welcome.)

A example of this is this line that will probally appear in chapter 1

Audrey waved to the kids that were heading to school, though she did't feel right about it.


With most of you guys post I have already made a perfect plan how I will start Chapter 1 thanks for all the feedback! Also the name has been chosen for Zardenia's right hand man... His name is  Illander.

Thanks for the feedback writing of chapter 1 will begin... ehm Now? after I have asked a certain player something.

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Post by Spookster on Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:54 am

Trializ wrote:Did someone say rping? owo

No its Not a Rp, though some Rp things may come in its still not a Rp and is based on town's players of the server  Surprised

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Post by Jams on Wed Jun 18, 2014 12:01 pm

HappySpookster wrote:
Jammy wrote:Stories! Yay! Jammy in! Even though Im not sure what Rp these guys are on about.

They were in a small Rp which involved Zardenia too

But if your in...

Are you willing to give me permission to write anything? or are there things I need to keep in mind  Smile

Yea, sure.

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Post by BranRam on Thu Jun 19, 2014 2:25 pm

Mouh-I'd like to be in eet!
And even though it's totally not Minecraft, I'd like to be my creeper-self. xP If ya can.
Also if you're doing some good vs. bad, good please? .w.
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Post by Spookster on Sat Jun 28, 2014 5:19 am

Just going to message here when new chapters will come

for the one's who not know already...

Chapter 1 The attack

http://bigsister.forumotion.com/t261-x-the-curse-of-the-temple-x-chapter-1-the-attack

Chapter 2 Who are you?

http://bigsister.forumotion.com/t270-x-the-curse-of-the-temple-x-chapter-2-who-are-you#4278

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Post by Spookster on Wed Jul 02, 2014 4:20 pm

Hey all! I haven't got much time to write another chapter (Busy week) so I thoght I would note it... Though I could probally tell the name of the next Chapter


"A ghastly encounter"

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Post by Spookster on Fri Aug 08, 2014 6:20 am

Chapter 6!

-x- The Curse of the Temple -x- Chapter 6# The cursed town

http://bigsister.forumotion.com/t342-x-the-curse-of-the-temple-x-chapter-6-the-cursed-town#5573

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