Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Thank you so much Burger! So glad that I did decent on my app, and hope to be romping around with you on the server! Oh, and by the way, you have the coolest avatar

GigaStorm wrote:Thank you so much Burger! So glad that I did decent on my app, and hope to be romping around with you on the server! Oh, and by the way, you have the coolest avatar

Yes yes he does
I hope the same

Cirrian, if you make changes, remember to repost your application. Also, question #4 facts need to be in full complete sentences (between 12-15 words per sentence, in case you're wondering).  

Chop chop!  Your friends await!  ;D

Ciabatta wrote:Cirrian, if you make changes, remember to repost your application. Also, question #4 facts need to be in full complete sentences (between 12-15 words per sentence, in case you're wondering).  

Chop chop!  Your friends await!  ;D

Ok

Cirrian wrote:4.)-I've Always been the good guy in my life
   -I stay up late completing projects
   -I Love to be a Great and hilarious guy
   -I love helping people
   -I love to hang with friends

Ciabatta wrote:Also, question #4 facts need to be in full complete sentences (between 12-15 words per sentence, in case you're wondering).  

Chop chop!  Your friends await!  ;D

I think that says everything that needs to be said, Cirrian.

I think that says everything that needs to be said, Cirrian.[/quote]

Ok,
Imma go be bored in happy wheels
Dogs are stressing me out  

lol, that almost sounds like it null and voids each and every one of those random fun facts.  

2.) I Saw the trailer, And the cool part was the mini-games like golf, I would love to join white-list Because from my experience white-listed servers are filled with good people
The main reason is because i'd love to meet new people to play mini-games in, And this was the only working page

3.) I Would report a griefer as soon as i see him destroying
a build, And i would help build/take down certain builds that need help, I would make people laugh aswell, I hate when people are sad,so i'd cheer them up. If someone needs help in Directions/building/where to build i would tell them Who  to ask for building areas and tell them mini-game locations

4.))-I've Always been the good guy in my life, including my friends and my dads.
  -I stay up late completing projects like science/math/tests/english and such.
  -I Love to be a Great and hilarious guy, I cheer up sad people and my friends.
  -I love helping people with /tests/english/grammar/spelling and such.
  -I love to hang with friends, walk around, talk and play games like manhunt etc.

5.) 19 Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that
external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6.) Cheese

Im tired and stressed from my step-mom's dog
and my aunties dog fighting

Cirrian wrote:2.) I Saw the trailer, And the cool part was the mini-games like golf, I would love to join white-list Because from my experience white-listed servers are filled with good people
The main reason is because i'd love to meet new people to play mini-games in, And this was the only working page

3.) I Would report a griefer as soon as i see him destroying
a build, And i would help build/take down certain builds that need help, I would make people laugh aswell, I hate when people are sad,so i'd cheer them up. If someone needs help in Directions/building/where to build i would tell them Who  to ask for building areas and tell them mini-game locations

4.))-I've Always been the good guy in my life, including my friends and my dads.
  -I stay up late completing projects like science/math/tests/english and such.
  -I Love to be a Great and hilarious guy, I cheer up sad people and my friends.
  -I love helping people with /tests/english/grammar/spelling and such.
  -I love to hang with friends, walk around, talk and play games like manhunt etc.

5.) 19 Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that
external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6.)

Hey hey, Cirrian! I'll be reviewing your application this time!

Now, first off, it's always nice to post the question being asked before your answer. Saves us time making sure you're answering it correctly.

Secondly, could you put your IGN here as a #1? It helps us make sure your Forum name is/isn't the same as your Minecraft name. It's for security reasons.

The previous reviewers said your answers to 2 and 3 seem to check out, but I personally think they could just be a tad more lengthy. I understand if you're having troubles writing about yourself (as I tend to), so no worries. Ignore this suggestion if you want. xP

As for your random facts...

1: Are you missing some apostrophes there? Or do you have multiple fathers? xP
2: Hehe, we're all guilty of staying up late. Just don't let that ruin your experience in life and in this server.
3: You're a funny guy, eh? I might have some competition...
4: No offense, but if you're so good at helping people with grammar, couldn't you take some time to spell check your own work? See my reply to fact #1 again. >w<
5: Eugh... ManHunt? Isn't that game, like, really bad? Don't they have that banned in some countries? Or am I thinking of a different game? Either way, please think of a different fact here. Talking, walking around, none of that is random enough for an answer.

And you seem to have cut off your answer to 6, but you answered it before. I'll let it slide. ^w^


So, my conclusion? Your facts need some straightening out. Your answers to 2 and 3 could use a bit more, but that's only a thing that's bugging me. Feel free to leave them if you wish, but you'll earn a higher score if you give me better ones.

((And if you're tired, worry about this application tomorrow: your writing is much better when you're well-rested! ^w^))

Cirrian wrote:Im tired and stressed from my step-mom's dog
and my aunties dog fighting

Word of advice:

If you're tired, don't write up our whitelist application -- save it for some other day and time when you're not tired.  It's not like we'll go away tomorrow or something.  

If you write our application under the influence of stress and fatigue and it shows, we'll only give you more stress and fatigue when we rag on it.  

Anyway, we're playing tag-team, so now Flamm will review your [hopefully final] app.  Good luck.  

1.) Cirrian

2.) I Saw the trailer, And the cool part was the mini-games like golf, I would love to join white-list Because from my experience white-listed servers are filled with good people
The main reason is because i'd love to meet new people to play mini-games in, And this was the only working page

3.) I Would report a griefer as soon as i see him destroying
a build, And i would help build/take down certain builds that need help, I would make people laugh aswell, I hate when people are sad,so i'd cheer them up. If someone needs help in Directions/building/where to build i would tell them Who  to ask for building areas and tell them mini-game locations

4.))-I've Always been the good guy in my life, including my friends and my dad's life aswell .
 -I stay up late completing projects like science/math/tests/english and such.
 -I Love to be a Great and hilarious guy, I cheer up sad people and my friends.
 -I love helping people with /tests/english/grammar/spelling and such.
 -I love to hang with friends, walk around, talk and play games like manhunt etc.

5.) 19 Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that
external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6.) Cheese

1.Tinyelf101

2.I have seen the add and it look's really fun.i don't know everything about gulliver but i do know the basic fun stuff.I was really hoping that i could play with you on the server.

3.(talent's):i am good at making people feel better,making friend's,being nice to other's,and being honest and fun.(skillz):building,making joke's,helping,and being funny.(experience):i don't really know what your talking about but i think it means this:i have had minecraft for about 9 month's.i got minecraft for Christmas.i have played non stop.minecraft is my favorite game and one of my favorite thing's to do.(traits):funny,shy,sensitive,sweet,loves to do pranks,loves to be around others,and loves to have friends.(sorry if i used to many words.i wasn't keeping track
4.(1)has 2 friends at school.
(2)is in a brand new school called Sunrise Elementary.
(3)has 1 mom,1 dad,1 sister,1 brother.
(4)i am the oldest child in my household family.
(5)i have 1 hamster,4 fish,and 3 cats.
5.14.Please refrain from obstructing a player's right to observe cultural holidays, so long as the
observance is not physically harmful to other player's or builds.
6.Cheese" is the official server currency, and cheese blocks (aka sponges) or blue cheese blocks (aka lapis lazuli blocks) are the official physical currency denominations. These can be deposited or withdrawn from any Cheese ATM with no exchange rate.

(I was really hoping that you would let me go on.  i have been wanting to join FOREVER and finally i went to this website...please?)

Cirrain, you're tired, go to bed. We will wait till you're fresh again to continue this review.

Ciabatta wrote:Cirrain, you're tired, go to bed.  We will wait till you're fresh again to continue this review.

I snoozed :l
Im energized
And happy

(for about 2hours)

Im sorry Tinyelf, like I said before our server may be too scary for someone who is easily frightened by "mean people". Thank you for trying, though.

Cirrian wrote:

Ciabatta wrote:Cirrain, you're tired, go to bed.  We will wait till you're fresh again to continue this review.

I snoozed :l
Im energized
And happy

Doesn't look it. We'll see you again tomorrow.

oh....ok....  ...

Cirrian wrote:1.) Cirrian

2.) I Saw the trailer, And the cool part was the mini-games like golf, I would love to join white-list Because from my experience white-listed servers are filled with good people
The main reason is because i'd love to meet new people to play mini-games in, And this was the only working page

3.) I Would report a griefer as soon as i see him destroying
a build, And i would help build/take down certain builds that need help, I would make people laugh aswell, I hate when people are sad,so i'd cheer them up. If someone needs help in Directions/building/where to build i would tell them Who  to ask for building areas and tell them mini-game locations

4.))-I've Always been the good guy in my life, including my friends and my dad's life aswell .
 -I stay up late completing projects like science/math/tests/english and such.
 -I Love to be a Great and hilarious guy, I cheer up sad people and my friends.
 -I love helping people with /tests/english/grammar/spelling and such.
 -I love to hang with friends, walk around, talk and play games like manhunt etc.

5.) 19 Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that
external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6.) Cheese

Hmm, it seems you didn't listen to me when I said find a new final fact. If it this Manhunt is really the one I'm thinking of (and this here is what I'm worried about), then I'm afraid that you're not such a "good guy". Sure, I like my own violent games, but not as crazy as this one.   

Please, replace that fact. Also, for not listening to me, I'm now telling you to make your answers to 2 and 3 longer. If you don't listen to me this time, I'm sure no-one who reviews this will listen to you.


Crossed that out because of a private message from Cirrian, explaining what "manhunt" is. Apparently, it's a version of "Tag". Either way, I'll ask you to find a new fact: once again talking and walking around won't cut it.

1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
my minecraft IGN is: stellan11

2)
I really wanna join this server because i love Gulliver mod! I will try joining a server with other people! I've actually never joined a modded server. Only pixelmon servers, but this server Looks EPIC! And i really wanna be whitelisted! I really hope i can be! <3 You guys wanted to know how i got known with Gulliver mod. For 1 Years ago i watched mod showcases. Later i've seen alot of people making mod showcases of it. I wanted to try it for myself and it was very cool! Now i've looked for good servers with Gulliver Mod. And then i felt over this one.
I wanna stay at server for: 1. I love gulliver mod 2. I wanna remove the destroyers/griefers 3. I love modded servers 4. I wanna help the server.

3)
my talents is being nice to people. Help people a lot of stuff. My experience is very hard to explain actually. I'm also Singing in a profesionall choir called "Det Norske Guttekoret" Transelated "The Norwegian Choir of Boys" I've also won the 1st prize at "Siggerud's Got Talent" what is a local Talent show at school. Other than that i'm one of the most unpopular boy at school.   

4)
I'm living in a country called Norway.
My age is 12 and i'm getting 13 in 30. November.
I use my free time to play games with friends.
I'm going at middle school (8. Class)
I'm a Middle Professionall Singer.


5) Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide.
Cheese   

I rlly hope i getting Whitelisted on this awesome server!

stellan11 wrote:1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
my minecraft IGN is: stellan11

2)
I really wanna join this server because i love Gulliver mod! I will try joining a server with other people! And maybe be crushed... I've actually never joined a modded server. Only pixelmon servers, but this server Looks EPIC! And i really wanna be whitelisted! I really hope i can be! <3

3)
my talents is being nice to people. Help people a lot of stuff. My experience is very hard to explain actually. I can craft alot of things in minecraft! Someone says i really need to be an Architect in minecraft... I'm a really good friends of ExplodingTNT if you know who he is N' stuff.

4)
I'm living in a country called Norway.
My age is 12 and i'm getting 13 in 30. November.
I'm a amateur PS gamer and a Pro Minecraft Gamer
I use my free time to play Minecraft with my friends.
I'm going at middle school (8. Class)
I was a Helper on a popular server called Nova.


5) Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide.
Cheese   

I rlly hope i getting Whitelisted on this awesome server!

Another European player, eh? Well, let’s see what you’ve got…

Okay, this first section (rather, your answer to question 2) has two problems. One: you don’t give any specific reason to join (and stay) with us besides the fact we have Gulliver’s mod. We’re looking for more than just that here. Also, you mention getting crushed… just don’t bother anyone to go out of their way to do that to you, would you, please? Harassment (verbal and/or physical) doesn’t getting anyone anywhere - unless it’s off the server.

Now, onto your next answer; you give some very general in-game and social skills, but something more specific would be nice. On that note, I glanced at ExplodingTNT’s channel (I don’t think I’ve heard of him before, honestly), and his channel didn’t seem bad, but just knowing a minor Youtube celebrity isn’t going to get you on the server, nor is it a skill

And here are your five - ahem, six random facts… three of which are related to Minecraft, and are thus moot. Replace those with something random, and yet revealing of your character so we have a better idea of what you’re prone to do on our server. ^^

The Right/Responsibility here just about checks out, anyway…

And you got cheese right. Congrats.

So, overall, your app needs a bit of work, but it’s not entirely hopeless. Just fix everything above, and you should be good to go. ^^

BurgerWarrior wrote:

stellan11 wrote:1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
my minecraft IGN is: stellan11

2)
I really wanna join this server because i love Gulliver mod! I will try joining a server with other people! And maybe be crushed... I've actually never joined a modded server. Only pixelmon servers, but this server Looks EPIC! And i really wanna be whitelisted! I really hope i can be! <3

3)
my talents is being nice to people. Help people a lot of stuff. My experience is very hard to explain actually. I can craft alot of things in minecraft! Someone says i really need to be an Architect in minecraft... I'm a really good friends of ExplodingTNT if you know who he is N' stuff.

4)
I'm living in a country called Norway.
My age is 12 and i'm getting 13 in 30. November.
I'm a amateur PS gamer and a Pro Minecraft Gamer
I use my free time to play Minecraft with my friends.
I'm going at middle school (8. Class)
I was a Helper on a popular server called Nova.


5) Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide.
Cheese   

I rlly hope i getting Whitelisted on this awesome server!

Another European player, eh? Well, let’s see what you’ve got…

Okay, this first section (rather, your answer to question 2) has two problems. One: you don’t give any specific reason to join (and stay) with us besides the fact we have Gulliver’s mod. We’re looking for more than just that here. Also, you mention getting crushed… just don’t bother anyone to go out of their way to do that to you, would you, please? Harassment (verbal and/or physical) doesn’t getting anyone anywhere - unless it’s off the server.

Now, onto your next answer; you give some very general in-game and social skills, but something more specific would be nice. On that note, I glanced at ExplodingTNT’s channel (I don’t think I’ve heard of him before, honestly), and his channel didn’t seem bad, but just knowing a minor Youtube celebrity isn’t going to get you on the server, nor is it a skill

And here are your five - ahem, six random facts… three of which are related to Minecraft, and are thus moot. Replace those with something random, and yet revealing of your character so we have a better idea of what you’re prone to do on our server. ^^

The Right/Responsibility here just about checks out, anyway…

And you got cheese right. Congrats.

So, overall, your app needs a bit of work, but it’s not entirely hopeless. Just fix everything above, and you should be good to go. ^^

I've edited. And yee very nice to say "Another European Player, eh?"... So what if i said "Ahh not another guy from United States" For example....

stellan11 wrote:
I've edited. And yee very nice to say "Another European Player, eh?"... So what if i said "Ahh not another guy from United States" For example....

Please repost your app instead of editing it, we need it seperate in order to link to it in our moderator threads.

In addition, he didn't say 'European player' as an offessive term =/ hes only making conversation, dont be so sensitive. Merely noting the fact you're from Europe, and telling you we have other players from there. Your response 'not another guy from united states' however -is- offensive, since you said you said you disliked having more by adding -not- to your sentence.

ShadowScale wrote:

stellan11 wrote:
I've edited. And yee very nice to say "Another European Player, eh?"... So what if i said "Ahh not another guy from United States" For example....

Please repost your app instead of editing it, we need it seperate in order to link to it in our moderator threads.

In addition, he didn't say 'European player' as an offessive term =/ hes only making conversation, dont be so sensitive. Merely noting the fact you're from Europe, and telling you we have other players from there. Your response 'not another guy from united states' however -is- offensive, since you said you said you disliked having more by adding -not- to your sentence.

OK so i'm going to repost it? Isn't that spam? But kk! I hope i get in.

1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
my minecraft IGN is: stellan11

2)
I really wanna join this server because i love Gulliver mod! I will try joining a server with other people! I've actually never joined a modded server. Only pixelmon servers, but this server Looks EPIC! And i really wanna be whitelisted! I really hope i can be! <3 You guys wanted to know how i got known with Gulliver mod. For 1 Years ago i watched mod showcases. Later i've seen alot of people making mod showcases of it. I wanted to try it for myself and it was very cool! Now i've looked for good servers with Gulliver Mod. And then i felt over this one.
I wanna stay at server for: 1. I love gulliver mod 2. I wanna remove the destroyers/griefers 3. I love modded servers 4. I wanna help the server.

3)
my talents is being nice to people. Help people a lot of stuff. My experience is very hard to explain actually. I'm also Singing in a profesionall choir called "Det Norske Guttekoret" Transelated "The Norwegian Choir of Boys" I've also won the 1st prize at "Siggerud's Got Talent" what is a local Talent show at school. Other than that i'm one of the most unpopular boy at school. Crying or Very sad

4)
I'm living in a country called Norway.
My age is 12 and i'm getting 13 in 30. November.
I use my free time to play games with friends.
I'm going at middle school (8. Class)
I'm a Middle Professionall Singer.


5) Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide.
Cheese Razz

I rlly hope i getting Whitelisted on this awesome server!