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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by StorySaysTruth on Fri Aug 22, 2014 10:37 am

stellan11 wrote:1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
my minecraft IGN is: stellan11

2)
I really wanna join this server because i love Gulliver mod! I will try joining a server with other people! I've actually never joined a modded server. Only pixelmon servers, but this server Looks EPIC! And i really wanna be whitelisted! I really hope i can be! <3 You guys wanted to know how i got known with Gulliver mod. For 1 Years ago i watched mod showcases. Later i've seen alot of people making mod showcases of it. I wanted to try it for myself and it was very cool! Now i've looked for good servers with Gulliver Mod. And then i felt over this one.
I wanna stay at server for: 1. I love gulliver mod 2. I wanna remove the destroyers/griefers 3. I love modded servers 4. I wanna help the server.

3)
my talents is being nice to people. Help people a lot of stuff. My experience is very hard to explain actually. I'm also Singing in a profesionall choir called "Det Norske Guttekoret" Transelated "The Norwegian Choir of Boys" I've also won the 1st prize at "Siggerud's Got Talent" what is a local Talent show at school. Other than that i'm one of the most unpopular boy at school.  Crying or Very sad

4)
I'm living in a country called Norway.
My age is 12 and i'm getting 13 in 30. November.
I use my free time to play games with friends.
I'm going at middle school (8. Class)
I'm a Middle Professionall Singer.


5) Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide.
Cheese  Razz

I rlly hope i getting Whitelisted on this awesome server!
Also just noting to anybody in the future too. Don't write "I rlly hop to get an whitelistzz omgz" because it doesn't increase your chances of logging on to the server even slightly,
because obviously if you send a whitelist app in then of course you like the server >.<

Just Keep it in mind.
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by BurgerWarrior on Fri Aug 22, 2014 3:16 pm

What Moab said, though I don’t particularly mind people adding ‘I rlly hope i getting Whitelisted on this awesome server!’, it doesn’t help you at all. Some other mods might even say that’s ‘impatient’, or ‘patronizing’, and reduce your chance of getting in.

Anyway...

As Shadow said, Stellan, I didn’t mean the ‘European’ comment in an offensive way, though after glancing at it again that wasn’t entirely clear. And I apologize for not reviewing this earlier…

stellan11 wrote:1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
my minecraft IGN is: stellan11

2)
I really wanna join this server because i love Gulliver mod! I will try joining a server with other people! I've actually never joined a modded server. Only pixelmon servers, but this server Looks EPIC! And i really wanna be whitelisted! I really hope i can be! <3 You guys wanted to know how i got known with Gulliver mod. For 1 Years ago i watched mod showcases. Later i've seen alot of people making mod showcases of it. I wanted to try it for myself and it was very cool! Now i've looked for good servers with Gulliver Mod. And then i felt over this one.
I wanna stay at server for: 1. I love gulliver mod 2. I wanna remove the destroyers/griefers 3. I love modded servers 4. I wanna help the server.

3)
my talents is being nice to people. Help people a lot of stuff. My experience is very hard to explain actually. I'm also Singing in a profesionall choir called "Det Norske Guttekoret" Transelated "The Norwegian Choir of Boys" I've also won the 1st prize at "Siggerud's Got Talent" what is a local Talent show at school. Other than that i'm one of the most unpopular boy at school.  Crying or Very sad

4)
I'm living in a country called Norway.
My age is 12 and i'm getting 13 in 30. November.
I use my free time to play games with friends.
I'm going at middle school (8. Class)
I'm a Middle Professionall Singer.


5) Please avoid breaking rules of conduct on our official server forum, as bad behaviour in that external site could lead to punitive action on our server.

6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide.
Cheese  Razz

I rlly hope i getting Whitelisted on this awesome server!

At any rate, it’s still not quite right. For one thing, you must have mis-translated what I said about your answer to question 2. I did not want to know how you got Gulliver mod or how you got into it - I want to know why you want to join our server, besides Gulliver. So, go look at the server trailer, and point out some specific things that interest you (or make some logical inferences based on our rules/forums, like some people have), please.

Er… most people tend not to like to post up their life story as an answer for number three, because that’s not what we’re asking for. By experiences and skills, I mean in-game, though you have the social parts down. Anyway, please work on that, as well. ^^

Your five facts are all good in length, though some aren’t the most character-revealing… but I think through your current answer to number 3 I can excuse that, since that shows a lot.

Anyway, again, you Right/Responsibility section is good, and… I guess ‘razz’ is a typo, in the cheese section, since you got it right before.

Anyway, work on your answers to questions 2 and 3, and then hopefully you should be good this time around. ^^

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Jackholmesnh on Sat Aug 23, 2014 8:48 am

My Minecraft IGN is: Jackholmesnh

I would like to arrive in peace to this server because I am 11 year old, very interested in the Gulliver Mod, and I would like to arrive in a whitelist server with a bunch of wonderful players, especially how the Gulliver Mod is my FAVORITE mod out of them all, and I have never had an opportunity with my laptops in the past to use mods, now that I have a new mac desktop, I am able to work with resource packs and mods. I would like to start modding here, which I would think will probably become my favorite server. I would also like to help out on a server of which I have not done yet.

Facts about me:

1. I am a curious 11 year old who is addicted to Mods and servers in Minecraft.

2. My talents are predicting the weather, various speed bike riding, fast typing for an 11 year old, and using Adobe Photoshop.

3. I live in a part of United States that is called, New England, locating myself in Southern New Hampshire near Massachusetts.

4. I am a very good rule follower and creator. You can trust me very much when it comes to rules.

5. I like to hike mountains and see cool views very much. Very Happy

I am a very good Minecraft player when it comes to peace and happiness. Smile

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Flammole on Sat Aug 23, 2014 8:59 am

Jackholmesnh wrote:My Minecraft IGN is: Jackholmesnh

I would like to arrive in peace to this server because I am 11 year old, very interested in the Gulliver Mod, and I would like to arrive in a whitelist server with a bunch of wonderful players, especially how the Gulliver Mod is my FAVORITE mod out of them all, and I have never had an opportunity with my laptops in the past to use mods, now that I have a new mac desktop, I am able to work with resource packs and mods. I would like to start modding here, which I would think will probably become my favorite server. I would also like to help out on a server of which I have not done yet.

Facts about me:

1. I am a curious 11 year old who is addicted to Mods and servers in Minecraft.

2. My talents are predicting the weather, various speed bike riding, fast typing for an 11 year old, and using Adobe Photoshop.

3. I live in a part of United States that is called, New England, locating myself in Southern New Hampshire near Massachusetts.

4. I am a very good rule follower and creator. You can trust me very much when it comes to rules.

5. I like to hike mountains and see cool views very much. Very Happy

I am a very good Minecraft player when it comes to peace and happiness. Smile

Please, could you read the entire application requirements? You're missing plenty of questions. Plus, your mention of "trust" makes me suspicious of you. Typically, those that say "trust me" are the ones we really need to keep an eye on.

((And please, don't use the Dice Roll, it was completely unnecessary.))

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Post by awsomesaucedude on Sat Aug 23, 2014 9:26 am

I may have forgot a few things if I did I will post them sepratly

1. matthew_d_c

2.i want to join becauce the youtube ad by shadowscales and others were epic.

3. I am good at finding people doing bad things, I can snoop for what they are doing wrong, and finally I am someone fun to play with.

4.i am known as batman and darth vader by friends, I can say a couple things in 6 languages including Klingon, was born on national star wars day (may the 4th be with you), study the elements on free time (periodic table), favorite food is almost anything to do with cheese (was another reason why I joined).

5. #5.
If Tiny, you have the right to carve a home within Spawnington, its sewers, or its various hovels, so
long as the outward appearance of the aforementioned structures are not altered. I will to be small often so yeah and funny its rule #5 on question #5


6.CHEESE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



so can I join and benefit this server and have fun at the same time.

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Ciabatta on Sat Aug 23, 2014 11:04 am

hehe, oh boy, did you ever forget. XD

And the answer to the last question is 'no', but a reviewer will better explain why later (that is, unless you rewrite your application based on the application instructions first). Smile

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by stellan11 on Sat Aug 23, 2014 11:39 am

Ciabatta am i in?

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Ciabatta on Sat Aug 23, 2014 12:03 pm

stellan11 wrote:Ciabatta am i in?

Read Burger's response to you above. Thanks.

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by BurgerWarrior on Sat Aug 23, 2014 1:25 pm

awsomesaucedude wrote:I may have forgot a few things if I  did I will post them sepratly

1. matthew_d_c

2.i want to join becauce the youtube ad by shadowscales and others were epic.

3. I am good at finding people doing bad things, I can snoop for what they are doing wrong, and finally I am someone fun to play with.

4.i am known as batman and darth vader by friends, I can say a couple things in 6 languages including Klingon, was born on national star wars day (may the 4th be with you), study the elements on free time (periodic table), favorite food is almost anything to do with cheese (was another reason why I joined).

5.      #5.
If Tiny, you have the right to carve a home within Spawnington, its sewers, or its various hovels, so
long as the outward appearance of the aforementioned structures are not altered. I will to be small often so yeah and funny its rule #5 on question #5


6.CHEESE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



so can I join and benefit this server and have fun at the same time.

As Ciabatta said, this isn’t going to get you in. Yet. Though allow me to point out some specifics.

2) This is supposed to be 60 words long, minimum. To give you an idea of how much you need to add, you only have 14 words here. So please get more specific.

3) This section also has a minimum of 60 words, so add some in-game skills and some other helpful things (like, I dunno, your willingness to give people tours or something?).

4) This is supposed to be bullet-pointed, but besides that, your facts are actually not bad - though the ‘star wars day’ one doesn’t really reveal your character. Also, Qapla’! Razz

5) As a warning here, you are allowed to ‘burrow’ into other players’ homes, but only if you get their permission first, and if they want you out, they have the right to kick you out. Besides that, this section is good.

6) Aaaaaannnnnd correct.

So, overall, your answer to 2 needs to be longer, 3 needs to be longer, 4 needs better formatting and one fact re-worked… and that should be it! Get all that fixed up, and you should be good to go, Matt.

Also, please, when you do so, repost the entire app ^^

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Trovo22 on Sat Aug 23, 2014 3:12 pm

ShadowScale wrote:
Trovo22 wrote:
Trovo22 wrote:
My IGN is: trovo22.

The reason I want to join this server is because the trailers looked fantastic, plus I love the gulliver mod and it's roleplaying aspects. I think it'd be great fun and a great experience to join this minecraft server.

Well, I built an enormous castle on survival on the server www.escapecraft.com if you want me to show you it, keep in mind it was in 1.7.2 (beta) so it's a little outdated I'm sure. I like to catch criminals such as greifers or griefers take your pick. I'd say I'm fairly mature on a minecraft server but with my friends we like to joke around.

1. I'm turning 16 Sept 4th.
2. I'm a sophomore.
3. At one house I own a great dane named Butterscotch.
4. At the other I own an american cockerspaniel named Cupcake.  
(both names weren't mine to choose)
5. I play steam a lot, for instance, Dota 2, Total War, TF2, ect.

7.Please refrain from creating pixel art within and slightly beyond the city    limits of Spawnington.

I think there's an upside and a downside. Upside is that people who suck at pixel art will not be allowed, and, you know some people just don't want to see that. Downside is that, for me anyways, is that I think it'd be cool to see some pixel art near spawn, but the cons out way the pros.

The official Currency is cheese and cheese blocks (which is sponge) and blue cheese or blue cheese blocks (which is lapis)

Thank you for taking the time to review my application.



heya =] thanks for applying for the server again.

Well, the reasons for joinging are alright. I see you were brought to us through the trailers, that's good to hear that they are working =] can you tell us what exactly interested you about the server from these trailers? mention things like the features and places. its just to buff up your app a little =] Otherwise its good there, and yes we do a lot of roleplaying on the server and on the forums ^_^

Onto the 3rd question, you could post pics of your builds on the forums if you want to show people =] though its not required, but its nice to hear that your a good builder, we value those people on here. And if you want to catch greifers, make sure you post evidence on the forum with pics/video if your able, its very helpful =P. Otherwise this section is fine.

As for the layout of the app, its almost there, but it needs the questions before your answers, just to space it out a little more and make it look professional. Right now though, you've spaced the answers out pretty nicely and there quite a bit of content there, so id say thats all it needs to improve.

Your facts are okay, if a little normal. A lot of players play steam on here so you'll feel at home talking to them about those games =]. They are fine, you can leave them like that.

The responsibility is correct, as for pixel art, you could try creating pixel art that faces towards the sky instead, as from dynmap you can see it really clearly. Some people have already done some like that if you want to see examples, just look on dynmap =]

And finally the cheese question is correct.

So, in conclusion, the app is almost there, it just needs some tiny tweaks to it which I mentioned above, after that, you should be fine to enter =] if your not sure, ill list them below for you.

Improvments Needed:


  • Type the questions before the answers (in bold or another colour preferably)
  • Add features that brought you to the server for question 2


Hey, I have edited the application, I apologize for such a late reply I've been without internet for a while.


1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?

My IGN is: trovo22.

2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.

The reason I want to join this server is because the trailers looked fantastic, I especially like the mini-games, plus I love the gulliver mod and it's roleplaying aspects. I think it'd be great fun and a great experience to join this minecraft server.

3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.

Well, I built an enormous castle on survival on the server www.escapecraft.com if you want me to show you it, keep in mind it was in 1.7.2 (beta) so it's a little outdated I'm sure. I like to catch criminals such as greifers or griefers take your pick. I'd say I'm fairly mature on a minecraft server but with my friends we like to joke around.

4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.

1. I'm turning 16 Sept 4th.
2. I'm a sophomore.
3. At one house I own a great dane named Butterscotch.
4. At the other I own an american cockerspaniel named Cupcake.  
(both names weren't mine to choose)
5. I play steam a lot, for instance, Dota 2, Total War, TF2, ect.

5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.

7.Please refrain from creating pixel art within and slightly beyond the city    limits of Spawnington.

I think there's an upside and a downside. Upside is that people who suck at pixel art will not be allowed, and, you know some people just don't want to see that. Downside is that, for me anyways, is that I think it'd be cool to see some pixel art near spawn, but the cons out way the pros. (edit: I now realize people use pixel art on the ground for the map.)

6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide  please write down the name of the official server currency.

The official Currency is cheese and cheese blocks (which is sponge) and blue cheese or blue cheese blocks (which is lapis)

Thank you for taking the time to review my application.

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by ShadowScale on Sat Aug 23, 2014 8:00 pm

Trovo22 wrote:
Hey, I have edited the application, I apologize for such a late reply I've been without internet for a while.


1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?

My IGN is: trovo22.

2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.

The reason I want to join this server is because the trailers looked fantastic, I especially like the mini-games, plus I love the gulliver mod and it's roleplaying aspects. I think it'd be great fun and a great experience to join this minecraft server.

3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.

Well, I built an enormous castle on survival on the server www.escapecraft.com if you want me to show you it, keep in mind it was in 1.7.2 (beta) so it's a little outdated I'm sure. I like to catch criminals such as greifers or griefers take your pick. I'd say I'm fairly mature on a minecraft server but with my friends we like to joke around.

4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.

1. I'm turning 16 Sept 4th.
2. I'm a sophomore.
3. At one house I own a great dane named Butterscotch.
4. At the other I own an american cockerspaniel named Cupcake.  
(both names weren't mine to choose)
5. I play steam a lot, for instance, Dota 2, Total War, TF2, ect.

5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.

7.Please refrain from creating pixel art within and slightly beyond the city    limits of Spawnington.

I think there's an upside and a downside. Upside is that people who suck at pixel art will not be allowed, and, you know some people just don't want to see that. Downside is that, for me anyways, is that I think it'd be cool to see some pixel art near spawn, but the cons out way the pros. (edit: I now realize people use pixel art on the ground for the map.)

6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide  please write down the name of the official server currency.

The official Currency is cheese and cheese blocks (which is sponge) and blue cheese or blue cheese blocks (which is lapis)

Thank you for taking the time to review my application.

Jeez, this took a long time didnt it? xP

Anyways, ill look at what I asked you to do and then make my verdict from what you did.

Right okay, you wrote the questions before the answers like I asked, thats good =] makes it look nice to read and professional. However for the second point I asked, which was to add what interested you in particular would be -just- acceptable (albeit, quite short and lazy) but since its been such a long time, theres really no excuse for that xP.

So, because of the timegap, we need to make sure you still would play on the server for a reasonable amount of time, to do that, you will have to add a bit more to question 2. I would ask more, but your app is very nice, and nice and maturely written, so I expect you'll be okay to join teh server after this is added. Again, its only to make sure its not just a fleeting jab at joining =]

Anyways, make those changes and you should be fine ^_^

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by ShadowScale on Sat Aug 23, 2014 9:39 pm

XMOAB2DEATHX wrote:Did he just triple post? or are my eyes deceiving me?

He did, seemed to have failed in quoting flams post properly.

Anyways, the info he added was poorly written as well, and didnt really add anything, so: *Ninja Shadow Edit* *poof*

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Jackholmesnh on Sat Aug 23, 2014 10:54 pm

Can I redo my application in a much better way of writing and explaining things? I have been seeing this server ever since it was brand new. tongue 

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by BurgerWarrior on Sun Aug 24, 2014 12:10 am

Jackholmesnh wrote:Can I redo my application in a much better way of writing and explaining things? I have been seeing this server ever since it was brand new. tongue 

That is the whole point of the application process - very few people these days make it in on the first try. So, go back, make an app the correct way, fill out everything we need you to fill out, and hopefully you'll show yourself as a trustworthy person that's capable of reading minutiae.

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by StorySaysTruth on Sun Aug 24, 2014 6:07 am

Also, This server is more strict when it comes to applications.
Just making sure that everyone that gets in is safe Wink
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Jackholmesnh on Sun Aug 24, 2014 10:24 am

1) What is your Minecraft username (or IGN)?

My Minecraft IGN is Jackholmesnh.

2) Please explain why you would like to join the server.

I would like to join the server because I have seen most likely all of the server videos and trailers, and they were the BEST trailers I have ever seen a server make, I would also like to join a whitelist community with a bunch of good people who have made it through the applications, and the Gulliver Mod is my favorite mod, it is especially fun on multiplayer servers.

3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.

My talents such as being a good rule follower, and a good Minecrafter, and some of my other good server talents can help by keeping the server fun, and appreciating. My talents can also make others feel good for the fact that I and others around the servers are good on self-control.

4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.

1. I am an 11 year old who is very interested and curious about games and interesting things in life.

2. I am the oldest and 2nd tallest kid in my grade.

3. I have been playing Minecraft since the 1.1 update in 2011.

4. I am a fan of fast downhill bike riding and my favorite type of style is new style.

5. I moved into a new house a month and a half ago.

5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.

My most enjoyable responsibility is right 20: "Please help keep the atmosphere on our server peaceful, laid-back, exhilarating, appreciative, and fun. The reason why I say this is because, it is one of the most important parts of a server in my opinion, and if a server didn't have this, then nobody would join it, therefore, that is why I think this part is most important for a server.

6) The official server currency is "Cheese."

Happy Regards,
Jackholmesnh  Smile 

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by BurgerWarrior on Sun Aug 24, 2014 11:38 am

Jackholmesnh wrote:1) What is your Minecraft username (or IGN)?

My Minecraft IGN is Jackholmesnh.

2) Please explain why you would like to join the server.

I would like to join the server because I have seen most likely all of the server videos and trailers, and they were the BEST trailers I have ever seen a server make, I would also like to join a whitelist community with a bunch of good people who have made it through the applications, and the Gulliver Mod is my favorite mod, it is especially fun on multiplayer servers.

3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.

My talents such as being a good rule follower, and a good Minecrafter, and some of my other good server talents can help by keeping the server fun, and appreciating. My talents can also make others feel good for the fact that I and others around the servers are good on self-control.

4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.

1. I am an 11 year old who is very interested and curious about games and interesting things in life.

2. I am the oldest and 2nd tallest kid in my grade.

3. I have been playing Minecraft since the 1.1 update in 2011.

4. I am a fan of fast downhill bike riding and my favorite type of style is new style.

5. I moved into a new house a month and a half ago.

5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.

My most enjoyable responsibility is right 20: "Please help keep the atmosphere on our server peaceful, laid-back, exhilarating, appreciative, and fun. The reason why I say this is because, it is one of the most important parts of a server in my opinion, and if a server didn't have this, then nobody would join it, therefore, that is why I think this part is most important for a server.

6) The official server currency is "Cheese."

    Happy Regards,
          Jackholmesnh  Smile 

This is still not good enough, I’m afraid. I’ll go over everything quickly so it’s easy to understand what needs fixing.

2) We need specific reasons why you want to join. The filmmaking abilities of our community will not keep you on the server if, say, a similar Gulliver server cropped up. Do you like our mini-games? Our community? Our cities…? Just add some particular, not-directly-Gulliver-related reasons to not abandoned our server if another Gulliver server appears.

3) On a more nit-picky note, I think you need to learn the difference between ‘talent’ and ‘skill’. Razz Also, for the sake of length, do explain what particular ‘talents’ would make the server fun for the rest of us? You simply say you have some, and never extrapolate.

4) Your third fact here is an absolute no-no because it is video game related, and very few of the others reveal your character. We’re not looking for your whole backstory here - we want clues as to what you’re character is like.

5) Clear.

6) Clear.

Overall, your answers to 2, 3, and 4 need reworking - in some cases it’s is desperately needed. If you had paid closer attention to the whitelist app, I think you wouldn’t have needed this review…

As is, you’re free to try again, if you will.

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Jackholmesnh on Sun Aug 24, 2014 11:40 am

Ok can I quote to it?
 Question 

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Ciabatta on Sun Aug 24, 2014 2:20 pm

Jackholmesnh wrote:Ok can I quote to it?
 Question 

Hmm, you seem to be having a lot of trouble understanding what to do. Are you absolutely sure you want to be on this server? It might not get any easier, just so you know.

Well, just putting it out there... so long as you follow instructions and what Burger is telling you, you won't have to keep asking obvious questions.

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Post by Malachi577 on Sun Aug 24, 2014 6:53 pm

1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?

Malachi577


2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.

I have seen many awesome videos of this server, so i thought i would try out the server, I have heard and seen so many great things about the server
I have been looking for a great gulliver server and this was the best server that i've heard about, this is the gulliver server that is up the most.



3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.

I love to help other players who need help, I like to play with other players,
I dont talk a lot in the chat which also helps keep chat spam down. I'm A
great redstoner, and a good builder. I'm the head builder and a gym leader on a pixelmon server which is currently down.


4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.

1.I'm an 11 year old that likes to program and do coding.

2.I play online almost all day I usually play my Xbox 360.

3.I love to build and progam robots and computers.

4.I'm in 6th Grade at East Burke Middle School.

5.I Live For Jesus and God so i can go to heaven.


5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.

12.If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvP­obsessed player, you 
have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary.
.


6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide  please write down the name of the official server currency.

The Currency is "Cheese"


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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by BurgerWarrior on Sun Aug 24, 2014 9:36 pm

Malachi577 wrote:1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?

Malachi577


2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.

I've been loooking for a server with gullivers mod and i've seen great
videos on this server so I thought I should play on the server because it looked awesome!



3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.

I love to help other players who need help, I like to play with other players,
I dont talk a lot in the chat which also helps keep chat spam down.


4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.

1.I'm an 11 year old that likes to program and do coding.

2.I've been playing Minecraft since 1.4 update.

3.I love to build robots.

4.I'm in 6th Grade.

5.I live in North Carolina


5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.

12.If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvP­obsessed player, you 
have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary.
.


6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide  please write down the name of the official server currency.

The Currency is "Cheese" (Sponge)

Well, it’s nice that you want to join us (and you’ve got pretty good formatting on the side), but there are a few discrepancies…

First and foremost, your answer to question number 2 is far too short and vague. Give me some specific things about our server (besides the fact we use the Gulliver mod) to add to the length. ^^

Your third answer is also too short - add some in-game skills, as well as maybe some positive experiences/talents you have that can benefit our community.

As for your random facts, the second is both related to Minecraft and doesn’t really show us much about your character, while your third, fourth, and fifth facts feel very short. Not to mention the the fifth (and kind of the fourth) fact(s) don’t reveal much of your character, either. These facts are largely designed to do that.

As for your Right/Responsibility… eh, I won’t make you add a reason for choosing that one, yet. Depends on how you re-do the rest of your app.

And ‘cheese’ is correct for the last question (the addition of sponge isn’t necessary).

So, overall, your first two answers (2 and 3) need to be longer, and your random facts need a do-over in general. Fix that up, and we’ll see if you’re good to go. ^^

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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by killer5868 on Wed Aug 27, 2014 6:53 pm

IGN: killer5868.

Why I want to join: It has the Gulliver mod and it sounds very fun. There's mini games that are better than some of the servers I play on. It's not like most servers that make it so you can't play with your friends. There are houses for giants and tinyes. I would be able to build my own structures.
It's a freeroam except for the games. As a tiny you can go to a giant when they're not looking and steal something from there chest.

Talents on minecraft: I am a good builder.
I know a little bit about how the mod works.
My personalities are competitive nice, I can joke and play serious.
I am pretty good at parkour in minecraft. I'm pretty good at killing mobs like zombies when I'm surrounded.
5 facts:
*I am a kid but I will not reveal my age.
*I play football and when I was younger I was the 2nd best receiver.
*I am a big time gamer and I just normally sit and play xbox or ps3 for at least 4-5 hours sometimes 3 hours 6 rarely.
*I am a christian. Smile 

Rights: You have the right to build a home of an appropriate scale [and make] in an unclaimed area. I like the right because most servers don't allow you to build anything.

The currency is cheese.  Very Happy

Is the little blocks mod in the server?
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by ShadowScale on Wed Aug 27, 2014 8:44 pm

killer5868 wrote:IGN: killer5868.

Why I want to join: It has the Gulliver mod and it sounds very fun. There's mini games that are better than some of the servers I play on. It's not like most servers that make it so you can't play with your friends. There are houses for giants and tinyes. I would be able to build my own structures.
It's a freeroam except for the games. As a tiny you can go to a giant when they're not looking and steal something from there chest.

Talents on minecraft: I am a good builder.
I know a little bit about how the mod works.
My personalities are competitive nice, I can joke and play serious.
I am pretty good at parkour in minecraft. I'm pretty good at killing mobs like zombies when I'm surrounded.
5 facts:
*I am a kid but I will not reveal my age.
*I play football and when I was younger I was the 2nd best receiver.
*I am a big time gamer and I just normally sit and play xbox or ps3 for at least 4-5 hours sometimes 3 hours 6 rarely.
*I am a christian. Smile 

Rights: You have the right to build a home of an appropriate scale [and make] in an unclaimed area. I like the right because most servers don't allow you to build anything.

The currency is cheese.  Very Happy

Is the little blocks mod in the server?

Heya =] ill be reviewing your application today =]

okay your names suitable, though hopefully you wont be doing much killing in-game xP

As for the second question, this is perfect ^_^ you mentioned very specific things about the server that only we have, instead of the cliche: "Its a gulliver mod server and I found it" xP. Good choices there too =] we have entire towns of tiny and giant housing for almost all sizes, so you should enjoy that immensely ^_^

Now, onto the 3rd question, you've given a lot of different skills here, but not a lot of detail with them. Can you give examples of cool things you've built or maybe custom parkour maps you've done? it'll buff this section up nicely =]

Your facts seem fine, only you've only put 4 facts instead of 5 xP can you add another fact there please? then that should be fine =]

And finally the last two security checks are correct.

So, this just needs a few tiny tweaks here and there and it will be good to go. See what ive mentioned and make the changes please =]

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Post by Colby_BB on Wed Sep 03, 2014 5:53 pm

My minecraft ign:Colby_BB

I would like to join it because the Gulliver mod is really fun and will be even more fun online!

Im pretty laid back,I am pretty good at building to but not the best Razz.I will also do my best to keep the server safe!

I love the blue angels(A jet squad)Indiana jones,and I just gotta be fast Very Happy

My favorite responsibility would be to say a message once and not spam.

The currency for the server is Cheese blocks(aka sponges)
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 1

Post by Minoriko on Wed Sep 03, 2014 7:16 pm

Colby_BB wrote:My minecraft ign:Colby_BB

I would like to join it because the Gulliver mod is really fun and will be even more fun online!

Im pretty laid back,I am pretty good at building to but not the best Razz.I will also do my best to keep the server safe!

I love the blue angels(A jet squad)Indiana jones,and I just gotta be fast Very Happy

My favorite responsibility would be to say a message once and not spam.

The currency for the server is Cheese blocks(aka sponges)

Hello! I will be assessing your white-list application, now lets get to it.

Your in game name is acceptable, so far so good!

Your reason for joining is acceptable, but quite generic. It would be nice if you state why you want to join Big Sister over another server. Why not check out what is on the forum and see what else makes you want to join?

Onto the talents! Building is always good and trying to keep the server is noble, but again these are quite generic. Some more information on talents you have would be great here!

Your random facts are a bit lacking, you should try fleshing out what you have put down and add two more to make that total of five.

For your responsibilities it would be best if you pick one from the Novices Creed and explain why you like it, again, flesh it out!

Cheese is a pass, yup!

So in conclusion, you need to flesh out much of your application with more information and try improving the layout of it too! Make it pretty and a pleasure to read and you will get in, so for the time being, try again!
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