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Show your writing/literature!
So, I've noticed some writing enthusiasts on this site, I thought maybe we should make a thread for them to share the pieces they've done. ^v^
Beside, sometimes "words" are more powerful than anything else. uwo
You can post anything like literature, poetry, stories, anything! Just remember to "Spoiler", so the users don't have to scroll down for an hour just to see your story. <:3
Have fun writing!~
Beside, sometimes "words" are more powerful than anything else. uwo
You can post anything like literature, poetry, stories, anything! Just remember to "Spoiler", so the users don't have to scroll down for an hour just to see your story. <:3
Have fun writing!~
Pazlin- Posts : 328
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Re: Show your writing/literature!
This is just a quick little thing, I don't really know what to call it, a piece of writing perhaps. Nonetheless I hope you enjoy!
He shot up in bed as if something had possessed him. His eyes were incredibly bloodshot, with only few patches of white. Shaking, he pulled back the twisted duvet, and placed two feet onto the ground. There was something different about him, he could feel it, smell it, taste it, yet powerless control it. Rapidly, he entered his bathroom and stared into the mirror. Moments pass. "W-what.. am I?" He asked himself. The boy he saw in the mirror wasn't who he'd seen so abundantly throughout his life. He slowly placed his trembling hands, onto the blemish-less, pure white bunny ears sprouting from his head. Determining whether he would ever live a normal live again, the boy confided in a pale bunny suit, to conceal his eye-opening secret.
He shot up in bed as if something had possessed him. His eyes were incredibly bloodshot, with only few patches of white. Shaking, he pulled back the twisted duvet, and placed two feet onto the ground. There was something different about him, he could feel it, smell it, taste it, yet powerless control it. Rapidly, he entered his bathroom and stared into the mirror. Moments pass. "W-what.. am I?" He asked himself. The boy he saw in the mirror wasn't who he'd seen so abundantly throughout his life. He slowly placed his trembling hands, onto the blemish-less, pure white bunny ears sprouting from his head. Determining whether he would ever live a normal live again, the boy confided in a pale bunny suit, to conceal his eye-opening secret.
sazzlepopz- Posts : 21
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Re: Show your writing/literature!
...You know, at some points, I think you're talking about my Minecraft Character. owo;
If it is, this would be a really suitable to my character, if by chance it's not, I'd still commend your amazing job on this little story!
If it is, this would be a really suitable to my character, if by chance it's not, I'd still commend your amazing job on this little story!
Pazlin- Posts : 328
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Re: Show your writing/literature!
I was hoping you'd notice, Paz
sazzlepopz- Posts : 21
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Hehe, of course I'd notice. :3 I made this thread, after all, I should at least take care of it before it takes flight(if it will). :3
Pazlin- Posts : 328
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Re: Show your writing/literature!
I couldn't help but notice, it's basically the same story xP! However, it is quite a good telling of the story! Good job!
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Re: Show your writing/literature!
Glad you agreed, a4. owo
Pazlin- Posts : 328
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Here's another piece of writing o' mine It's a lil' bit longer than the last. (Btw thanks a4 & paz )
"The man. The myth. The legend." What a familiar phrase. Yet it didn't seem to fit in with his whole 'look'. You see, he's not the type to be widely known. He's a nice boy, a bit quiet, and I suppose he would be best described as one who keeps to oneself. At least, that's what he wants you to assume. What you don't know, is that he's watching, listening, learning all about what's going on. The key is to be attentive. He camouflages himself with that image, in reality.
Once he is curtained behind an untouchable mask, his real personality kicks in. A swift, limitless rebel, an independent, self-governed agent, a rightful ninja with the ability to flawlessly conquer self-stain criminals effortlessly. A courteous competitor for justice, he has never been obtained, never been witnessed and has never broken down. Apart from once.
The only information about him is an abrupt code name - a4955
"The man. The myth. The legend." What a familiar phrase. Yet it didn't seem to fit in with his whole 'look'. You see, he's not the type to be widely known. He's a nice boy, a bit quiet, and I suppose he would be best described as one who keeps to oneself. At least, that's what he wants you to assume. What you don't know, is that he's watching, listening, learning all about what's going on. The key is to be attentive. He camouflages himself with that image, in reality.
Once he is curtained behind an untouchable mask, his real personality kicks in. A swift, limitless rebel, an independent, self-governed agent, a rightful ninja with the ability to flawlessly conquer self-stain criminals effortlessly. A courteous competitor for justice, he has never been obtained, never been witnessed and has never broken down. Apart from once.
The only information about him is an abrupt code name - a4955
sazzlepopz- Posts : 21
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Re: Show your writing/literature!
Wow, Sazz is on fire with the fancy words and the literary prowess of an Edwardian scholar. ^.^
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Re: Show your writing/literature!
Heh, that looks so cool! I bet a4 is going to love it. OwO
Pazlin- Posts : 328
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YUP.Pazlin wrote:I bet a4 is going to love it. OwO
But seriously, this is great, thanks! I'm flattered that you chose to write one for me! (Although it's probably because I'm the only person other than Paz who had posted in this thread XD If you decide to keep this trend up, good luck writing a story from "I am a busy baker, forced into administrative servitude." XP) These story re-tellings are great, hope you keep it up! Thanks!
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I'm actually looking forward to it. owo
Pazlin- Posts : 328
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Sorry for the lateness in my next piece of writing, - homework seems to give me no inspiration
Thank you a4, I was hoping you'd like it!
Thanks Ciabatta! Now to start a re-telling of you...
“Imagination is the beginning of creation. You imagine what you desire, you will what you imagine, and at last, you create what you will” – George Bernard Shaw.
Bursts of inventiveness take place in her mind. It's a new idea, but if taken in to hand, it will have countless positive reflections on the people who find it. This new possibility, put together with her love for baking, and busy job, how will she have time? Well, teamwork and determination...
Bit by bit, she creates a beautiful server, one which can leave a witness in awe of its complexity, mixed with a great deal of effort and work...
Before she knew it, her server took off with it's popularity, with a rather well-thought acceptance policy. Her baking has sky-rocketed too, which just shows how hard work beats talent, when talent doesn't work hard.
Thank you a4, I was hoping you'd like it!
Thanks Ciabatta! Now to start a re-telling of you...
“Imagination is the beginning of creation. You imagine what you desire, you will what you imagine, and at last, you create what you will” – George Bernard Shaw.
Bursts of inventiveness take place in her mind. It's a new idea, but if taken in to hand, it will have countless positive reflections on the people who find it. This new possibility, put together with her love for baking, and busy job, how will she have time? Well, teamwork and determination...
Bit by bit, she creates a beautiful server, one which can leave a witness in awe of its complexity, mixed with a great deal of effort and work...
Before she knew it, her server took off with it's popularity, with a rather well-thought acceptance policy. Her baking has sky-rocketed too, which just shows how hard work beats talent, when talent doesn't work hard.
sazzlepopz- Posts : 21
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Re: Show your writing/literature!
*me dies with joy* THANK YOU!!!
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Ah, no worries XD It was a pleasure Cia
sazzlepopz- Posts : 21
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Wow, that looks really amazing! Great job, Sazzle!~
Sorry if I used the improper adjective, I've stayed in the world of visual art for a little too long. owo;
Anyway, that's amazingly done! ^v^
Sorry if I used the improper adjective, I've stayed in the world of visual art for a little too long. owo;
Anyway, that's amazingly done! ^v^
Pazlin- Posts : 328
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Thank you, paz! (Sorry for the very late gratitude XD)
sazzlepopz- Posts : 21
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You're welcomed, Saz! (Sorry for taking even more time to reply ^^; )
I'm thinking of writing something too, but I'm better at the speeches between characters(or just a single character), instead of the details of the scenario. ^w^; Tale-telling has never be one of my skill...
Still, I'm going to try if I'm able to write a story that way. owo
I'm thinking of writing something too, but I'm better at the speeches between characters(or just a single character), instead of the details of the scenario. ^w^; Tale-telling has never be one of my skill...
Still, I'm going to try if I'm able to write a story that way. owo
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Woah, I haven't posted anything in such a long time <:3
At the moment I'm writing this book for my friend, and I've only got the first chapter totally aced, so I hope you like it, and if you want you could give me some improvements ^^
Okay, let's begin...
Beginning of Summer Break
It's difficult to start this story. It's definitely not a fairy tale which one can so casually begin with the famous phrase, 'once upon a time', nor is it some story that can easily come to life with the few words describing what type of day it is. Let's just say, this story isn't just a story; it's my life. Read it with an open mind and an excepting heart, and maybe then it will be perceived in the way I'd always wanted, contrasting with the skeptical thoughts of my peers at this moment. But before you get into this story, if that is what you desire, you must be aware that everything I write is a part of me, and is precious and meaningful.
You might not believe my story, but it's true, differentiating with the regular reaction of the people I've shared it with. You see, my story is definitely one that is unusually remarkable, and one that scarcely takes place withing the lives of everyday people, but here I am, lucky enough to experience the wonders of this special adventure throughout my youth. Life is full of magnificent secrets and mysteries which adapt into unforgettable memories, memories which feel like I re-live them every time I remember them; the joy and cheer of a happy moment, the dread and sorrow of an unfortunate one... The feeling is maintained. I'm glad that through telling you my story, I can delve back into the past and hold dear the precious memories I'd made before.
This is only part one of the first chapter because I don't want to spam this thread with HUGE PARAGRAPHS all the time. Anyway, I hope you like it so far!
At the moment I'm writing this book for my friend, and I've only got the first chapter totally aced, so I hope you like it, and if you want you could give me some improvements ^^
Okay, let's begin...
Beginning of Summer Break
It's difficult to start this story. It's definitely not a fairy tale which one can so casually begin with the famous phrase, 'once upon a time', nor is it some story that can easily come to life with the few words describing what type of day it is. Let's just say, this story isn't just a story; it's my life. Read it with an open mind and an excepting heart, and maybe then it will be perceived in the way I'd always wanted, contrasting with the skeptical thoughts of my peers at this moment. But before you get into this story, if that is what you desire, you must be aware that everything I write is a part of me, and is precious and meaningful.
You might not believe my story, but it's true, differentiating with the regular reaction of the people I've shared it with. You see, my story is definitely one that is unusually remarkable, and one that scarcely takes place withing the lives of everyday people, but here I am, lucky enough to experience the wonders of this special adventure throughout my youth. Life is full of magnificent secrets and mysteries which adapt into unforgettable memories, memories which feel like I re-live them every time I remember them; the joy and cheer of a happy moment, the dread and sorrow of an unfortunate one... The feeling is maintained. I'm glad that through telling you my story, I can delve back into the past and hold dear the precious memories I'd made before.
This is only part one of the first chapter because I don't want to spam this thread with HUGE PARAGRAPHS all the time. Anyway, I hope you like it so far!
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