==--== The Apple Effect ==--== Chapter 1- Dead or Dying?

“...Timon? Is that… you?” Brandon (brandontienbui) said, hesitantly.
“Oh my gosh… Brandon… it’s been forever…” Timon (Turn999) said. He was about 8 inches tall, and was wearing a white sweater. He hadn’t always been that size though…
Brave (bravewolf11) and Chrisell (super7893) stood awkwardly at the side. Brave was Timon’s friend, also tiny. Chrisell was Brandon and Timon’s brother.
“But… how did you… I mean…”
“Well…”
A voice outside distracts them. The four of them walk downstairs, to see who it is. Brandon opens the door.
“Weird… It’s weird…” The girl (KCcraft81) standing outside in the cold rain said. She was slightly shorter than average. She had long caramel coloured hair and was wearing an orange zip hoodie. She was standing in the front yard, staring at the house, and didn’t seem to notice the four of them standing at the door. Her hair and clothing was soaked.
“Um… can I… help you?” Brandon said.
“Hmm?” The girl looked at them. She turned her head to the side, as if trying to look at them from a different view. “It’s weird…”
“What’s weird?”
“The house.”
“... Would you like to talk about this inside? It’s cold and wet out there.” Brandon said.
“...” The girl comes inside and dries off a little.
Timon continues the conversation from earlier. “I encountered a witch, and she made me this size.”
“A witch?” Said Chrisell.
Brave looked at the girl. She was turning in different directions, looking all over the room. Her eyes focused on Brave, and she stared at him. He mouths, Help me! to her, still in fear of the two other giants, despite them being Timon’s siblings.
She continued staring at him, then all of a sudden ran off upstairs.
“Yes, a witch.” Timon was saying. Brave looked back at the conversation, then slipped away unnoticed, following the girl upstairs.
She was in one of the empty, unused bedrooms. What is she doing?, Brave thought. She was rummaging under the desk, bed, and in the chests. It looked like she was searching for something.
“Lost… weird house…” Brave couldn’t hear the rest of the nonsense she was mumbling. The three siblings came running upstairs, and burst into the room.
“What’s going on in here?” Chrisell said. They gasped at the complete disorder of the room. A flying object went by and hit Brandon in the face.
“Ow!”
“Are you okay, Brand?” Timon said.
“Yeah… I’m fine…” He rubbed the side of his head. “Ugh… Anyway, what are you doing?!”
“Weird… weird… not right…” She wasn’t throwing things around anymore, she was just curled up in a ball on the ground, with her hands on her ears.
“Um… Miss… Are you alright?” Chrisell asked.
“What’s your name? Brandon said.
“Not okay… Kacey…” The girl replied. “The house is bad… something’s wrong…”
“What’s wrong?” Brandon was thoroughly confused by Kacey.
“It’s…” Kacey looked up at Brandon. “Who’s room is this?”
“It… used to be Timon’s, but I guess it will be again now.” Brandon glances at Timon.
“Nonononoo… because… No… that can’t be right…”
“Why not?” Chrisell said.
“Because… Timon… is… is… dead.” Kacey said.
“Um… I’m sorry… what?” Brandon said.
“You’re not making any sense!” Timon added.
She continued. “Dead… no… not… Not dead… Dying.”


(Phew. Sorry if you're not in the story, I was basing this off a roleplay we did! It's not done, we have a loooong way to go!)

I do note that there is a complete lack of poultry in this story.

-100 points for leaving us hungry.

Ciabatta wrote:I do note that there is a complete lack of poultry in this story.

-100 points for leaving us hungry.

Ciaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
why do you hate this?

whyyyyyyy

why cia? seriously if you don't like it than DON'T WRITE HERE

Oh, lighten up you fumblebums, I'm just joking.  

Even if it was a joke it was not funny ;-;

Ooh a story I have to rewrite my story once... (It's full of typo's    ) And return at making a sequel...

I hope to see more! I wish I was in that rp.

If you want, I can add you in later, since the ending was sort of open ended and I don't know what to do with it... I can add you there if you want!

Actually, in that case, if you would like to be in the story, tell me here, and I can add you in later!

Meeh lets do it... You have permission to add me

You can add me in as a barnacle... what this story needs is more barnacles. ^^

[sorry, forum RP injoke -- ask Burger about it]

Alright, since I don't want to accept TOO many people into it... I'll set a limit of... Let's say... 6 or 7? We'll see. So far, the people in are: Spook, a4 (I think), Cia? Do you actually want me to add you or not? I can, if you want.

WELL, maybe I MIGHT give you permission. *sigh* I GUESS that I would be okay with it. (In case you didn't know, that was a joke and I would definitely want to be in it)

Yay! Cool. Okay, so we'll see what happens later. It'll probably be a few chapters before you guys are added... so... Yeah...

Nah, I'm still playing, you know I'm not much of an RPer. Pretty glad you kids are doing something interesting and constructive, though (AND using the forum to coordinate...

*cries tears of pride*

Also I could basically be that same guy from that other rp that we did yesterday

Man, everytime I post, somebody has ALREADY written a new message, you guys just constantly refreshing the page to see if anything new has happened or something?

Well, it's more of a story than a roleplay... but that's fine.

xD Oh a... I keep getting notifications... if YOU stop posting, I'LL stop posting.

I WON't stop,posting *does evil laugh* *cough* oops

Ciabatta wrote:You can add me in as a barnacle... what this story needs is more barnacles.  ^^

[sorry, forum RP injoke -- ask Burger about it]

You mean this joke? >w<

(Toss me in if you wish, but I can also be the first one tossed out should another person want to join. ^w^)

So far people who've joined: Spook, a4 and Flam.

this thread is ded now





not big souprice

I still don't know what a souprice is

Also, I don't know if I'm going to continue this or not...