Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
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Whitelist application
I guess I will just redo some things on this one. (And this is the second time I am redoing it since it seems it didn't post the last time!)
1. My ingame name is Ninja_Tom, named after my cat.
2. I think that the server looks interesting, and after playing minecraft since 0.0.6 Alpha I had to take a break from of the old minecraft, but now after almost a year I am back for more! Where as I know Tekkit and FTB exists and I have played them I feel that its just to much content, so I prefer the regular minecraft with something to spice it up.
Another reason is that this server seems to be more populated then most servers with this mod, and I like being social.
The reason i would pick Gullivers over the others is simply because the other gives you extra content where Gullivers expand on whats already there. Things like Thaumcraft gives you a lot of new items but after a while it turns into the same old minecraft with the same old items. Mods like Gullivers and Smart Moving gives you a new way to play the game.
I have actually looked at this server before, but I have a bad experience with servers I join being either at the end of their life cycle and end up closing short after. I've played on fresh servers and helped build them up and been there watching as they withered away with time. So I would rather join a server that not only looks like have been put a lot of dedication into but also seems to hold on its own and look like it is going to survive for a long time.
3. I am pretty good at copying things I see, making me pretty good at making pictures into pixel art in minecraft.
I am often told that I have a great sense of justice, and that might be true. I am known for standing up for people that are bullied and whenever I feel someone is being treated unfair I make my opinion clear.
I am a forgiving person, and I might actually be a bit too forgiving at times.
Ingame I would say that I am a decent builder, my style is greatly inspired by the youtuber: Madnes64.
4.
*1. I can speak English, Norwegian and I am taking Japanese classes.
*2. I am taking an education which could lead me to be a future game developer.
*3. I love history, Everything from the Roman period and the three kingdoms period in china to world war 2 and the cold war.
*4. I love animals, and when people say: "Cat or Dog?" I can't decide.
*5. My fathers side of the family are originally form Sweden.
5. I would think 16 (As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented by the smaller player.) is the one I like the best, I personally hate bullying.
Though I personally like a challenge and would probably never ask another player to stop challenging me. (I have experience in playing against the odds.)
6. The currency is "Cheese", which consist of Sponge blocks or "blue cheese" Which is Lapiz Lazuli blocks. These can be deposited and withdrawn from a Cheese ATM.
1. My ingame name is Ninja_Tom, named after my cat.
2. I think that the server looks interesting, and after playing minecraft since 0.0.6 Alpha I had to take a break from of the old minecraft, but now after almost a year I am back for more! Where as I know Tekkit and FTB exists and I have played them I feel that its just to much content, so I prefer the regular minecraft with something to spice it up.
Another reason is that this server seems to be more populated then most servers with this mod, and I like being social.
The reason i would pick Gullivers over the others is simply because the other gives you extra content where Gullivers expand on whats already there. Things like Thaumcraft gives you a lot of new items but after a while it turns into the same old minecraft with the same old items. Mods like Gullivers and Smart Moving gives you a new way to play the game.
I have actually looked at this server before, but I have a bad experience with servers I join being either at the end of their life cycle and end up closing short after. I've played on fresh servers and helped build them up and been there watching as they withered away with time. So I would rather join a server that not only looks like have been put a lot of dedication into but also seems to hold on its own and look like it is going to survive for a long time.
3. I am pretty good at copying things I see, making me pretty good at making pictures into pixel art in minecraft.
I am often told that I have a great sense of justice, and that might be true. I am known for standing up for people that are bullied and whenever I feel someone is being treated unfair I make my opinion clear.
I am a forgiving person, and I might actually be a bit too forgiving at times.
Ingame I would say that I am a decent builder, my style is greatly inspired by the youtuber: Madnes64.
4.
*1. I can speak English, Norwegian and I am taking Japanese classes.
*2. I am taking an education which could lead me to be a future game developer.
*3. I love history, Everything from the Roman period and the three kingdoms period in china to world war 2 and the cold war.
*4. I love animals, and when people say: "Cat or Dog?" I can't decide.
*5. My fathers side of the family are originally form Sweden.
5. I would think 16 (As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented by the smaller player.) is the one I like the best, I personally hate bullying.
Though I personally like a challenge and would probably never ask another player to stop challenging me. (I have experience in playing against the odds.)
6. The currency is "Cheese", which consist of Sponge blocks or "blue cheese" Which is Lapiz Lazuli blocks. These can be deposited and withdrawn from a Cheese ATM.
Ninja_Tom- Posts : 2
Join date : 2015-02-15
Age : 27
Location : Norway, Oslo, somewhere.
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
Ninja_Tom wrote:I guess I will just redo some things on this one. (And this is the second time I am redoing it since it seems it didn't post the last time!)
1. My ingame name is Ninja_Tom, named after my cat.
2. I think that the server looks interesting, and after playing minecraft since 0.0.6 Alpha I had to take a break from of the old minecraft, but now after almost a year I am back for more! Where as I know Tekkit and FTB exists and I have played them I feel that its just to much content, so I prefer the regular minecraft with something to spice it up.
Another reason is that this server seems to be more populated then most servers with this mod, and I like being social.
The reason i would pick Gullivers over the others is simply because the other gives you extra content where Gullivers expand on whats already there. Things like Thaumcraft gives you a lot of new items but after a while it turns into the same old minecraft with the same old items. Mods like Gullivers and Smart Moving gives you a new way to play the game.
I have actually looked at this server before, but I have a bad experience with servers I join being either at the end of their life cycle and end up closing short after. I've played on fresh servers and helped build them up and been there watching as they withered away with time. So I would rather join a server that not only looks like have been put a lot of dedication into but also seems to hold on its own and look like it is going to survive for a long time.
3. I am pretty good at copying things I see, making me pretty good at making pictures into pixel art in minecraft.
I am often told that I have a great sense of justice, and that might be true. I am known for standing up for people that are bullied and whenever I feel someone is being treated unfair I make my opinion clear.
I am a forgiving person, and I might actually be a bit too forgiving at times.
Ingame I would say that I am a decent builder, my style is greatly inspired by the youtuber: Madnes64.
4.
*1. I can speak English, Norwegian and I am taking Japanese classes.
*2. I am taking an education which could lead me to be a future game developer.
*3. I love history, Everything from the Roman period and the three kingdoms period in china to world war 2 and the cold war.
*4. I love animals, and when people say: "Cat or Dog?" I can't decide.
*5. My fathers side of the family are originally form Sweden.
5. I would think 16 (As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented by the smaller player.) is the one I like the best, I personally hate bullying.
Though I personally like a challenge and would probably never ask another player to stop challenging me. (I have experience in playing against the odds.)
6. The currency is "Cheese", which consist of Sponge blocks or "blue cheese" Which is Lapiz Lazuli blocks. These can be deposited and withdrawn from a Cheese ATM.
Hello Tom,
[I wonder where Jerry is at?]
Aha!! Much much better, and now I feel this application has precisely the substance and bite it needs.
I'll quickly cover only the new things added....
QUESTION 2: Superb! And nary a mention of boredom in sight!
Indeed, one thing I do not like about mods that add new content to Minecraft is that they very often integrate it rather poorly. The items may be buggy, imbalanced, poorly drawn/animated, and in general FEEL like something simply tacked-on to Minecraft rather than blended and emulsified the way I feel Gulliver is. Gulliver integrates SO BEAUTIFULLY into the Minecraft experience, it feels like you're playing Minecraft+ -- and that's precisely what Mion was after when creating the mod, and explains why she only added two new items (the two potions).
The other aspect that I appreciate you bringing up is longevity. I do agree, and know from personal experience, that unstable servers can and WILL deter creative output and deep interactions between players precisely because they are so transient. Why waste one's time building a nice city area when the server could easily disappear tomorrow, or the day after, or at any time the owner has a panic attack and closes the entire server while he crahttp://cartoonsimages.com/sites/default/files/field/image/Tom-and-Jerry2.jpgwls into a corner and mopes, expecting someone to come give him a hug? Stability, therefore, is a powerful (and sadly, rather rare) feature on Minecraft servers, and I am happy to say your assessment about ours in that respect is correct. We have been in operation for 1.2 years, and I renewed our server with our host provider for another year this past January, so I can guarantee that we'll still be in operation for the next 10 months at least. My goal is to keep this running for up to three years total, and after which we can decide from there whether we continue or retire, but I'll try to make it a community decision (and of course the map file and individual builds would be made available so no creation gets lost forever).
QUESTION 4.5: Haha, so glad I'm better at geography than the average American, who might not know that Sweden and Norway are too separate countries, or might not even know where they're located at. XD
I know both have great standards of living and fairly decent economies (comparatively-speaking with the rest of the Europe, at least), and the food is pretty unique and delicious, with a lot of fish oil sources consumed. ^^
QUESTION 5: Aha, THIS one.
I was a victim of this on our old parent server, Gunia's Gulliver server, so I have very strong opinions about players abusing their size and experience here against new players for their own personal amusement. Still, the reverse has also been true, where Tinies might do shady things against bigger players, which is why the adjacent rule #17 was also added.
VERDICT:
Okay, you were kind and gracious enough to correct all that was lacking with your original application and then some. So I feel you are deserving of your whitelist, and gladly bid you "velkommen" to our server.
Ciabatta- Admin
- Posts : 3885
Join date : 2014-01-03
Age : 33
Location : On the road
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Personality Trait: Busy
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
ItsRikuMC wrote:Hi, I would like to join the Big Sister server.
Question 1:
IGN: ItsRikuMC
Question2:
I would like to join because the Gulliver mod is awesome and it is really hard to find a server with it. I love to role play especially with this mod. I also love the fact that I can change size for free without brewing the potions, that is really awesome. I chose this server and not another one because mostly of the other servers do not have pre-builded houses for giants and tinies (I saw this in a video). I discovered the mod thanks to a youtuber: TheDiamondMinecart.
Question 3:
I would join the server a lot and I would keep friendly because I hate it when there's an argument because people are being unfriendly so I would like to stay nice and role play with the others. I'm not such a good builder at all but I guess I can make a small house.
Question 4:
5 random facts about me:
- I love chocolate and I do not understand people who don't
- I love RPG - games especially combined with minecraft
- I speak English, Dutch and a bit of French
- The name Riku is from my favorite RPG - game called Kingdom Hearts
- I have a dog called Simba
Question 5:
"If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvPobsessed player, you have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary." I chose this one because I'd like to be held by a Giant player if it is for fun but not when it's against your will. About the PvP-obssesed player: I hate it when people attack you without a reason.
Question 6:
The currency is "Cheese", which consist of Sponge blocks or "blue cheese" Which is Lapiz Lazuli blocks. These can be deposited and withdrawn from a Cheese ATM.
Thank you for reading and I hope I'm allowed on the server, Riku.
And ready or not, here I come...
Well, your reason to join isn't bad, per se. Though I'm not sure how many of those prefabricated giant houses are still available, the rest pretty much checks out, as well.
You're short the word minimum by a tad on question three, though, and your answer is... alright. You should probably note that Cia has a level of dislike for roleplayers, so it would probably be good if you focused on enhancing your building skills while you're here. Adding that much to your answer here will also help you reach the minimal limit of words.
I'm not quite liking your random facts, though. Two of them are based on games, and one of them is just about your dog's name. While the fact you have a dog is something, you might want to switch the game-based facts out for something more character-revealing. Your mastery of several languages is impressive, though. ^^
Your quoted Right is pretty good, as well. Just keep in mind that reporting such individuals to the staff is more effective than fighting back in-game. There are a lot of us for a reason, after all.
Finally, you are correct.
Overall, while KC seems to have helped you quite bit, I believe I've given you the last, refining touches you'll need to get whitelisted. Please look through my review, correct only what needs correcting, and you should be good to go. Good luck! ^^
BurgerWarrior- Posts : 540
Join date : 2014-01-03
Location : California
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Personality Trait: Laid-Back
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
Thank you! I'll make a new in a sec...
ItsRikuMC- Posts : 10
Join date : 2015-02-16
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Name: Riku
Personality Trait: Optimistic
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
My second application, let's do it!
Question 1:
IGN: ItsRikuMC
Question2:
I would like to join because the Gulliver mod is awesome and it is really hard to find a server with it. I love to role play especially with this mod. I also love the fact that I can change size for free without brewing the potions, that is really awesome. I chose this server and not another one because mostly of the other servers do not have pre-builded houses for giants and tinies (I saw this in a video). I discovered the mod thanks to a youtuber: TheDiamondMinecart.
Question 3:
I would join the server a lot and I would keep friendly because I hate it when there's an argument because people are being unfriendly so I would like to stay nice and role play with the others. I'm not such a good builder at all but I guess I can make a small house. I would like to increase my building skills a bit to but I don't know if I'll ever become a good builder in Minecraft. What I also like to do is surviving as a tiny person or as a Giant.
Question 4:
5 random facts about me:
- I love chocolate and I do not understand people who don't
- I love animals they are kinda my best friends
- I speak English, Dutch and a bit of French, I'm gonna learn German later
- I never had cavities
- I have a dog
Question 5:
"If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvPobsessed player, you have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary." I chose this one because I'd like to be held by a Giant player if it is for fun but not when it's against your will. About the PvP-obssesed player: I hate it when people attack you without a reason.
Question 6:
The currency is "Cheese", which consist of Sponge blocks or "blue cheese" Which is Lapiz Lazuli blocks. These can be deposited and withdrawn from a Cheese ATM.
Thank you for reading and I hope I'm allowed on the server, Riku.
Question 1:
IGN: ItsRikuMC
Question2:
I would like to join because the Gulliver mod is awesome and it is really hard to find a server with it. I love to role play especially with this mod. I also love the fact that I can change size for free without brewing the potions, that is really awesome. I chose this server and not another one because mostly of the other servers do not have pre-builded houses for giants and tinies (I saw this in a video). I discovered the mod thanks to a youtuber: TheDiamondMinecart.
Question 3:
I would join the server a lot and I would keep friendly because I hate it when there's an argument because people are being unfriendly so I would like to stay nice and role play with the others. I'm not such a good builder at all but I guess I can make a small house. I would like to increase my building skills a bit to but I don't know if I'll ever become a good builder in Minecraft. What I also like to do is surviving as a tiny person or as a Giant.
Question 4:
5 random facts about me:
- I love chocolate and I do not understand people who don't
- I love animals they are kinda my best friends
- I speak English, Dutch and a bit of French, I'm gonna learn German later
- I never had cavities
- I have a dog
Question 5:
"If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvPobsessed player, you have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary." I chose this one because I'd like to be held by a Giant player if it is for fun but not when it's against your will. About the PvP-obssesed player: I hate it when people attack you without a reason.
Question 6:
The currency is "Cheese", which consist of Sponge blocks or "blue cheese" Which is Lapiz Lazuli blocks. These can be deposited and withdrawn from a Cheese ATM.
Thank you for reading and I hope I'm allowed on the server, Riku.
ItsRikuMC- Posts : 10
Join date : 2015-02-16
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Name: Riku
Personality Trait: Optimistic
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
ItsRikuMC wrote:My second application, let's do it!
Question 1:
IGN: ItsRikuMC
Question2:
I would like to join because the Gulliver mod is awesome and it is really hard to find a server with it. I love to role play especially with this mod. I also love the fact that I can change size for free without brewing the potions, that is really awesome. I chose this server and not another one because mostly of the other servers do not have pre-builded houses for giants and tinies (I saw this in a video). I discovered the mod thanks to a youtuber: TheDiamondMinecart.
Question 3:
I would join the server a lot and I would keep friendly because I hate it when there's an argument because people are being unfriendly so I would like to stay nice and role play with the others. I'm not such a good builder at all but I guess I can make a small house. I would like to increase my building skills a bit to but I don't know if I'll ever become a good builder in Minecraft. What I also like to do is surviving as a tiny person or as a Giant.
Question 4:
5 random facts about me:
- I love chocolate and I do not understand people who don't
- I love animals they are kinda my best friends
- I speak English, Dutch and a bit of French, I'm gonna learn German later
- I never had cavities
- I have a dog
Question 5:
"If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvPobsessed player, you have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary." I chose this one because I'd like to be held by a Giant player if it is for fun but not when it's against your will. About the PvP-obssesed player: I hate it when people attack you without a reason.
Question 6:
The currency is "Cheese", which consist of Sponge blocks or "blue cheese" Which is Lapiz Lazuli blocks. These can be deposited and withdrawn from a Cheese ATM.
Thank you for reading and I hope I'm allowed on the server, Riku.
Eh... I'll admit I'm not completely positive about your five facts, but everything else checks out - including the facts, more or less - so... I'll go ahead and give you a whitelist. Just try to stay out of trouble while we make sure you fit on the server, okay?
Welcome aboard ^^
BurgerWarrior- Posts : 540
Join date : 2014-01-03
Location : California
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
Q1:Minecraft:xrayparker Q2:I would like to join because the Gulliver mod is awesome and it is really hard to find a server with it. I love to role play especially with this mod. I also love the fact that I can change size for free without brewing the potions, that is really awesome. I chose this server and not another one because mostly of the other servers do not have pre-builded houses for giants and tinies (I saw this in a video). I discovered the mod thanks to a youtuber: Yogscast Q3:I would join the server a lot and I would keep friendly because I hate it when there's an argument because people are being unfriendly so I would like to stay nice and role play with the others. I'm not such a good builder at all but I guess I can make a small house. I would like to increase my building skills a bit to but I don't know if I'll ever become a good builder in Minecraft. What I also like to do is surviving as a tiny person or as a Giant. Q4:1-i have a dog i treat him well. 2-i am very polite so they will be no fights 4-i can make cookies 5-i am very good with animals Q5:"If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvPobsessed player, you have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary." I chose this one because I'd like to be held by a Giant player if it is for fun but not when it's against your will. About the PvP-obssesed player: I hate it when people attack you without a reason. Q6:the currency is cheese AKA:sponge blocks blue cheese AKA:lapis. Thank you for your time .
xrayparker- Posts : 1
Join date : 2015-02-17
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
(Not staff)
Whoa. Okay, FIRST of all, I can't even read that. Unless your "enter" button is broken, you have no excuse for such terrible formatting. And SECOND of all... You quite literally copied EVERYTHING from ItsRikuMC, EXCEPT for your facts, which are very unoriginal. You copy pasted it, got right of good formatting, then changed your facts. Please COMPLETELY redo your application with proper formatting and your OWN text.
Thank you for your time.
Whoa. Okay, FIRST of all, I can't even read that. Unless your "enter" button is broken, you have no excuse for such terrible formatting. And SECOND of all... You quite literally copied EVERYTHING from ItsRikuMC, EXCEPT for your facts, which are very unoriginal. You copy pasted it, got right of good formatting, then changed your facts. Please COMPLETELY redo your application with proper formatting and your OWN text.
Thank you for your time.
KaCii- Posts : 211
Join date : 2014-11-23
Age : 22
Location : Canada
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Name: Kacey
Personality Trait: Shy
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Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
xrayparker wrote: Q1:Minecraft:xrayparker Q2:I would like to join because the Gulliver mod is awesome and it is really hard to find a server with it. I love to role play especially with this mod. I also love the fact that I can change size for free without brewing the potions, that is really awesome. I chose this server and not another one because mostly of the other servers do not have pre-builded houses for giants and tinies (I saw this in a video). I discovered the mod thanks to a youtuber: Yogscast Q3:I would join the server a lot and I would keep friendly because I hate it when there's an argument because people are being unfriendly so I would like to stay nice and role play with the others. I'm not such a good builder at all but I guess I can make a small house. I would like to increase my building skills a bit to but I don't know if I'll ever become a good builder in Minecraft. What I also like to do is surviving as a tiny person or as a Giant. Q4:1-i have a dog i treat him well. 2-i am very polite so they will be no fights 4-i can make cookies 5-i am very good with animals Q5:"If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvPobsessed player, you have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary." I chose this one because I'd like to be held by a Giant player if it is for fun but not when it's against your will. About the PvP-obssesed player: I hate it when people attack you without a reason. Q6:the currency is cheese AKA:sponge blocks blue cheese AKA:lapis. Thank you for your time .
Hello, xrayparker, my name is Lomgren and I will be reviewing your application today. Unfortunately, I have to say that this is the opposite of a good application. As KC alluded to, you directly copied and pasted the application from ItsRikuMC and made changes. This, by itself, is enough to disqualify your application. You then removed all formatting, and made it one huge blob of text, making reading it very difficult, potentially to hide the fact that you copied and pasted. That doesn't work.
Even though I could already disqualify the application at this point, I'm still going to go through it point by point.
Your username checks out as a valid minecraft username, at least, so I have to give that to you. And yes, we do have a way of confirming a user's minecraft name.
Questions 2 and 3 are invalid, as you just copied and pasted from the previous application.
For question 4, you only listed 4 facts. You completely skipped over number 3. And one of your facts is essentially a subset of another fact (being good with animals, and having a dog you treat well).
Question 5, copied and thus invalid.
Question 6, I am going to also mark as invalid, because I believe it was also copied from the previous app and changed slightly, even though it is technically correct.
I am sorry, but it is extremely obvious that you didn't put any effort into your application. At all. I doubt you have read the novice guidelines, and your lack of work means you will likely not make it on this server.
If you REALLY want to try again, you must do several things:
1. You must format your application so that it can be read.
2. You must use correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
3. You must write your own answers to questions 2, 3, and 5, and also prove that you have read the novice guidelines.
4. You must write a better set of 5 facts, and make sure they are 5 facts.
If ANY ONE of these is skipped, the next application by you will just be trashed, to put it bluntly.
Lomgren- Posts : 155
Join date : 2015-01-01
Age : 42
RP Character Sheet
Name: Lomgren Smalls
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Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
i may not share any personele stuff so i wish i could join but yeah i cant but if you add me i will be sooooooo happy it would be a if you add me so plzzzz do
Vaughndp- Posts : 6
Join date : 2015-02-22
Age : 20
Location : I can tell you but then I would have to kill you!
RP Character Sheet
Name: Sam
Personality Trait: Energetic
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
this will NOT work for sure just to say
Turn999- Posts : 415
Join date : 2014-04-14
Age : 24
Location : Your Nightmare
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Name: Turn (nickname Timon)
Personality Trait: Energetic
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
(Note that I am not staff but your app is clearly not going to get accepted like this)Vaughndp wrote:i may not share any personele stuff so i wish i could join but yeah i cant but if you add me i will be sooooooo happy it would be a if you add me so plzzzz do
First of all, you don't need to share personal stuff to make an app. Second of all, You need an app to join. Third of all, if you do plan to make an actual app, you will want to run it through some sort of spell check, seriously.
a4955- Posts : 638
Join date : 2014-09-27
Age : 22
Location : Canada
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Name: a4955
Personality Trait: Cowardly
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
I was about to add on, but a4 beat me to it. Said pretty much everything I wanted to say.
KaCii- Posts : 211
Join date : 2014-11-23
Age : 22
Location : Canada
RP Character Sheet
Name: Kacey
Personality Trait: Shy
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
Hello Vaughndp, I am one of the staff members here, and I will reiterate what the others have said - if you wish to join, you have to write out a full application. If that IS your application, then you have completely failed all of the requirements, and will not be allowed on the server. If you can't fill out an application because you aren't allowed to, then you aren't going to be allowed on the server either - we don't make exceptions like that. Begging does not work - we have standards that we follow for a reason.Vaughndp wrote:i may not share any personele stuff so i wish i could join but yeah i cant but if you add me i will be sooooooo happy it would be a if you add me so plzzzz do
Lomgren- Posts : 155
Join date : 2015-01-01
Age : 42
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Name: Lomgren Smalls
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Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
However, you don't necessarily have to share 'personal' stuff. We just want to know more about your character, rather than your personal, real life.
BurgerWarrior- Posts : 540
Join date : 2014-01-03
Location : California
RP Character Sheet
Name: Orphan Warrior
Personality Trait: Laid-Back
Character Description:
My first application!
FIRST OF ALL, SORRY FOR THE BAD ENGLISH, IM PORTUGUESE.
1) My IGN is RicoFox
2) I would like to join the server because I really love Gulliver's MOD, but it's really boring to play alone. Gulliver MOD, in my opinion, is the best MOD ever!!! I enjoy working in group . I saw all the trailers of the server and I really liked everything!
3) I got building skills, redstone skills, mining skills, PVP skills and of course Gulliver MOD's skills.
4)
[list]
5) I like this one:
16.As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the
smaller player.
6) CHEESE! (sponge/lapis blocks)
1) My IGN is RicoFox
2) I would like to join the server because I really love Gulliver's MOD, but it's really boring to play alone. Gulliver MOD, in my opinion, is the best MOD ever!!! I enjoy working in group . I saw all the trailers of the server and I really liked everything!
3) I got building skills, redstone skills, mining skills, PVP skills and of course Gulliver MOD's skills.
4)
[list]
- I like sandwiches.
- I like videos on YouTube
- I like kind people
- I like games like TF2, Portal2, Gmod, (steam games)
- I like dogs!
5) I like this one:
16.As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the
smaller player.
6) CHEESE! (sponge/lapis blocks)
RicoFox- Posts : 3
Join date : 2015-02-22
Age : 32
Location : My trailer
RP Character Sheet
Name: Rico Vulpes
Personality Trait:
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
RicoFox wrote:FIRST OF ALL, SORRY FOR THE BAD ENGLISH, IM PORTUGUESE.
1) My IGN is RicoFox
2) I would like to join the server because I really love Gulliver's MOD, but it's really boring to play alone. Gulliver MOD, in my opinion, is the best MOD ever!!! I enjoy working in group . I saw all the trailers of the server and I really liked everything!
3) I got building skills, redstone skills, mining skills, PVP skills and of course Gulliver MOD's skills.
4)
- I like sandwiches.
- I like videos on YouTube
- I like kind people
- I like games like TF2, Portal2, Gmod, (steam games)
- I like dogs!
5) I like this one: 16.As a Giant, please refrain from frequent and harmful bullying behavior, unless consented to by the smaller player.6) CHEESE! (sponge/lapis blocks)
Well, your English doesn't seem very bad - at least, not as bad as some players or applicants. However, your app is far too short to be accepted, I'm afraid - even if the formatting is fairly good.
Your reason to join is... well, vague. Please list some specifics from the trailers or other server forums. ^^
Could you please expand on the next answer, for question three? Your answers need to be roughly sixty words, remember.
Again, shortness kind of kills your random facts. You might want to change your second (the one about Youtube) and fourth (the one about video games) to show more about your character.
But your last two questions are answered well.
Overall, you seem like a nice guy, but your answers need far more depth. At least your language doesn't seem to be a barrier, as it has for other players in the past. Good luck!
BurgerWarrior- Posts : 540
Join date : 2014-01-03
Location : California
RP Character Sheet
Name: Orphan Warrior
Personality Trait: Laid-Back
Character Description:
Big Sister Appli-Cat-ion
Question 1: CatofSquid
Question 2: I love playing with mods and on servers but I have a hard time liking any of the ones I can find, and I've never been on a server with blocks as currency.
Question 3: I can memorize crafting recipes fairly easily, and I am a cheerful person who doesn't usually have bad days.
Question 4: I can do redstone fairly well
My character is a SquidCat (hence my username)
I live in Wisconsin
I love to terraform manually (tearing down mountains in survival)
I usually tend to go on servers on the weekends
Question 5: First of all I love the name Spawnington , it makes me giggle. Secondly I like this responsibility because I always like to help people
"Please be courteous to Staff, and observe their instructions should they give you any."
Question 6: "Cheese" is the official server currency, and cheese blocks (aka sponges) or blue cheese blocks (aka lapis lazuli blocks) are the official physical currency denominations. These can be deposited or withdrawn from any Cheese ATM with no exchange rate.
Question 2: I love playing with mods and on servers but I have a hard time liking any of the ones I can find, and I've never been on a server with blocks as currency.
Question 3: I can memorize crafting recipes fairly easily, and I am a cheerful person who doesn't usually have bad days.
Question 4: I can do redstone fairly well
My character is a SquidCat (hence my username)
I live in Wisconsin
I love to terraform manually (tearing down mountains in survival)
I usually tend to go on servers on the weekends
Question 5: First of all I love the name Spawnington , it makes me giggle. Secondly I like this responsibility because I always like to help people
"Please be courteous to Staff, and observe their instructions should they give you any."
Question 6: "Cheese" is the official server currency, and cheese blocks (aka sponges) or blue cheese blocks (aka lapis lazuli blocks) are the official physical currency denominations. These can be deposited or withdrawn from any Cheese ATM with no exchange rate.
SquidCat- Posts : 4
Join date : 2015-02-22
Age : 23
Location : prowling in the jungle or swimming in the ocean
RP Character Sheet
Name: Squid-Cat
Personality Trait: Optimistic
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
Dude, you don't want to have minecraft stuff on your random facts. Also, you might want to lengthen your 2nd and 3rd questions as they are pretty short.
a4955- Posts : 638
Join date : 2014-09-27
Age : 22
Location : Canada
RP Character Sheet
Name: a4955
Personality Trait: Cowardly
Character Description:
Second Appli-Cat-ion Edited*
Okay, second shot
Question 1: CatofSquid
Question 2: I love the idea of currency, my building skills are that high so you won't see anything like a Roman Colosseum. I think mods are a fun idea to do on a server instead of being anti-social in your single-player world. I've tried the Gulliver's mod and the little blocks mod together in a single-player world, but I've never played with it on a server and that's something I look foreword to doing.
Question 3: I am a friendly person who always willing to help , I love to be around others , and since I am a cat I still need a master to take orders from or to make sure I am doing things correctly. I try to interact with other players (helping , borrowing , giving , etc.) I usually will be on more often on the weekends ,but I try to go on during the week as well.
Question 4: Math is my strong-suit, it's not favorite subject but I'm good at it
My character is a SquidCat (hence my username)and they are mischievous and silly creatures as far as I know I am the only one of my kind
I live in Wisconsin, and people think I'm crazy for living here, especially in the winter where its almost always close to 0 degrees.
I love to terraform manually (tearing down mountains in survival)
My dream is to become a video game designer
Question 5: First of all I love the name Spawnington , it makes me giggle. Secondly I like this responsibility because I always like to help people
"Please be courteous to Staff, and observe their instructions should they give you any."
Question 6: "Cheese" is the official server currency, and cheese blocks (aka sponges) or blue cheese blocks (aka lapis lazuli blocks) are the official physical currency denominations.
Question 1: CatofSquid
Question 2: I love the idea of currency, my building skills are that high so you won't see anything like a Roman Colosseum. I think mods are a fun idea to do on a server instead of being anti-social in your single-player world. I've tried the Gulliver's mod and the little blocks mod together in a single-player world, but I've never played with it on a server and that's something I look foreword to doing.
Question 3: I am a friendly person who always willing to help , I love to be around others , and since I am a cat I still need a master to take orders from or to make sure I am doing things correctly. I try to interact with other players (helping , borrowing , giving , etc.) I usually will be on more often on the weekends ,but I try to go on during the week as well.
Question 4: Math is my strong-suit, it's not favorite subject but I'm good at it
My character is a SquidCat (hence my username)and they are mischievous and silly creatures as far as I know I am the only one of my kind
I live in Wisconsin, and people think I'm crazy for living here, especially in the winter where its almost always close to 0 degrees.
I love to terraform manually (tearing down mountains in survival)
My dream is to become a video game designer
Question 5: First of all I love the name Spawnington , it makes me giggle. Secondly I like this responsibility because I always like to help people
"Please be courteous to Staff, and observe their instructions should they give you any."
Question 6: "Cheese" is the official server currency, and cheese blocks (aka sponges) or blue cheese blocks (aka lapis lazuli blocks) are the official physical currency denominations.
Last edited by SquidCat on Mon Feb 23, 2015 8:59 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Questions 2 and 3 didn't reach the reqirments but they should know)
SquidCat- Posts : 4
Join date : 2015-02-22
Age : 23
Location : prowling in the jungle or swimming in the ocean
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Name: Squid-Cat
Personality Trait: Optimistic
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
(Not staff)
Question 2 and 3 are still a little short, as there is a 60 to 90 word limit on them. Most of your facts are fairly interesting, although I would suggest expanding on them. (What does this SquidCat do? What do you enjoy in math? Do you like living in Wisconsin? Things like that, you get the idea.) Change your last fact completely, it's a little... er... boring.
The rest is fine.
Question 2 and 3 are still a little short, as there is a 60 to 90 word limit on them. Most of your facts are fairly interesting, although I would suggest expanding on them. (What does this SquidCat do? What do you enjoy in math? Do you like living in Wisconsin? Things like that, you get the idea.) Change your last fact completely, it's a little... er... boring.
The rest is fine.
KaCii- Posts : 211
Join date : 2014-11-23
Age : 22
Location : Canada
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Name: Kacey
Personality Trait: Shy
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
I edited mine after it was already looked at so now two and three are longer
SquidCat- Posts : 4
Join date : 2015-02-22
Age : 23
Location : prowling in the jungle or swimming in the ocean
RP Character Sheet
Name: Squid-Cat
Personality Trait: Optimistic
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
SquidCat wrote:Okay, second shot
Question 1: CatofSquid
Question 2: I love the idea of currency, my building skills are that high so you won't see anything like a Roman Colosseum. I think mods are a fun idea to do on a server instead of being anti-social in your single-player world. I've tried the Gulliver's mod and the little blocks mod together in a single-player world, but I've never played with it on a server and that's something I look foreword to doing.
Question 3: I am a friendly person who always willing to help , I love to be around others , and since I am a cat I still need a master to take orders from or to make sure I am doing things correctly. I try to interact with other players (helping , borrowing , giving , etc.) I usually will be on more often on the weekends ,but I try to go on during the week as well.
Question 4: Math is my strong-suit, it's not favorite subject but I'm good at it
My character is a SquidCat (hence my username)and they are mischievous and silly creatures as far as I know I am the only one of my kind
I live in Wisconsin, and people think I'm crazy for living here, especially in the winter where its almost always close to 0 degrees.
I love to terraform manually (tearing down mountains in survival)
My dream is to become a video game designer
Question 5: First of all I love the name Spawnington , it makes me giggle. Secondly I like this responsibility because I always like to help people
"Please be courteous to Staff, and observe their instructions should they give you any."
Question 6: "Cheese" is the official server currency, and cheese blocks (aka sponges) or blue cheese blocks (aka lapis lazuli blocks) are the official physical currency denominations.
Okay, I think it's time for an actual staff member to give you an actual review, Squid. (Thanks for keeping him occupied though, guys )
Anyway, down to business. Your reason to join seems to be... er... that you like our currency? We take the 'we have Gulliver's mod' reason to join for granted, but besides that you just seem to like the currency system, which isn't terribly unique. Please actually come up with a legitimate reason to join. Also, you might want to work on your grammar...
As for the next question... er... you're not a cat. And we don't condone the 'master-slave' sort of mindset some people have, especially with this mod. You're looking less an less like the kind of person we want here...
As for your random facts, you should still rework the fifth one. Maybe add what you could do to help video game design? Do you plan to work with the code, come up with ideas, etc. etc.?
I'm... not sure how to react to your giggling at our capital's name... also, I don't see how wanting to help people makes you like that particular responsibility. Said responsibility just seems to make your 'master-slave' mindset look worse.
Aaand you got the last answer correct.
Overall, all technicality aside, you don't look like a prospective player, character-wise. Either correct my judgement if I'm somehow wrong (and reword most of your app to reflect your actual character, if I haven't pin-pointed it), or move on: right now, I'm not seeing much room in-between.
On that note, if you choose the former and re-apply (again), don't forget the minutiae of my review. Good luck going down whichever path you choose.
BurgerWarrior- Posts : 540
Join date : 2014-01-03
Location : California
RP Character Sheet
Name: Orphan Warrior
Personality Trait: Laid-Back
Character Description:
Appli-Cat-ion^3
I've taken the past reviews into thought, so third times the charm right?
Question 1: CatofSquid
Question 2: There aren't too many servers out there that are mostly mods, usually you'll see modded servers with factions or other things like that. I never been on a server with currency as blocks and I've always wanted to try that. I feel like if I can join a sever like this I might be able to increase my building skills or maybe even my ability to sort chests.
Question 3: I am a friendly person who always willing to help ,and I love to be around others. I try to interact with other players (helping , borrowing , giving , etc.) I usually will be on more often on the weekends ,but I try to go on during the week as well. I sometimes will need to be given a direction to go ,but for the most part I am self-reliant
Question 4: Math is my strong-suit, it's not favorite subject but I'm good at it
My character is a SquidCat (hence my username)and they are mischievous and silly creatures as far as I know I am the only one of my kind
I live in Wisconsin, and people think I'm crazy for living here, especially in the winter where its almost always close to 0 degrees.
I love to terraform manually (tearing down mountains in survival)
Although I love to be a loner IRL when I play I always love to just chit chat with other players
Question 5: First of all I love the name Spawnington , I'm very humorous so things like this make me laugh a little. Secondly I like this responsibility because I always try to help others
"Please be courteous to Staff, and observe their instructions should they give you any."
Question 6: "Cheese" is the official server currency, and cheese blocks (aka sponges) or blue cheese blocks (aka lapis lazuli blocks) are the official physical currency denominations.
Thank you to all those who gave me tips and pointers for this
Question 1: CatofSquid
Question 2: There aren't too many servers out there that are mostly mods, usually you'll see modded servers with factions or other things like that. I never been on a server with currency as blocks and I've always wanted to try that. I feel like if I can join a sever like this I might be able to increase my building skills or maybe even my ability to sort chests.
Question 3: I am a friendly person who always willing to help ,and I love to be around others. I try to interact with other players (helping , borrowing , giving , etc.) I usually will be on more often on the weekends ,but I try to go on during the week as well. I sometimes will need to be given a direction to go ,but for the most part I am self-reliant
Question 4: Math is my strong-suit, it's not favorite subject but I'm good at it
My character is a SquidCat (hence my username)and they are mischievous and silly creatures as far as I know I am the only one of my kind
I live in Wisconsin, and people think I'm crazy for living here, especially in the winter where its almost always close to 0 degrees.
I love to terraform manually (tearing down mountains in survival)
Although I love to be a loner IRL when I play I always love to just chit chat with other players
Question 5: First of all I love the name Spawnington , I'm very humorous so things like this make me laugh a little. Secondly I like this responsibility because I always try to help others
"Please be courteous to Staff, and observe their instructions should they give you any."
Question 6: "Cheese" is the official server currency, and cheese blocks (aka sponges) or blue cheese blocks (aka lapis lazuli blocks) are the official physical currency denominations.
Thank you to all those who gave me tips and pointers for this
SquidCat- Posts : 4
Join date : 2015-02-22
Age : 23
Location : prowling in the jungle or swimming in the ocean
RP Character Sheet
Name: Squid-Cat
Personality Trait: Optimistic
Character Description:
Re: Whitelist Applications - Archive 2
I... fail to see how just adding you're 'self-reliant' (when you also say, in the same phrase, that you still prefer directions, and you still don't offer a better explanation for your chosen responsibility) is supposed to alleviate my present worries about your character. At this point, I wouldn't mind you just posting normally to help your situation, because I'm really not that comfortable with the idea of letting you on the server at the moment, frankly.
Your grammar could also still use some work - you might want to take more time to work on it before posting again.
Your grammar could also still use some work - you might want to take more time to work on it before posting again.
BurgerWarrior- Posts : 540
Join date : 2014-01-03
Location : California
RP Character Sheet
Name: Orphan Warrior
Personality Trait: Laid-Back
Character Description:
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