Whitelist Applications - Archive 2

Blaize's improved app:

Q1) Okay!

Q2) Much, much better, thank you for clarifying those points like I asked you in the checklist. Do keep in mind not everyone likes being trapped.

Q3) Perfect ^-^ You have explained your points well! You sound like a great builder, you've even built a calculator. (wow, I'm impressed!) I'm very interested in your building skills 

Q4)
a) Good!
b) Good!
c) Aww :-:
d) Okay.
e) Good!

5) Correct!

6) Correct again!

Conclusion: *drum roll*  I can recommend you for whitelisting!

You're application just about passed! You did what I asked in the checklist, your grammar seems good and your facts are better!

Thank you so muck for your time and effort, Elmira_ .

Omg. MUCH! Not muck. I blame autocorrect.

Okay you should be able to go on the server now Blaize ^^.
(Also cool that you watch gravity falls, we can talk about mysteries and stuff on the server ^^)

tinyelf101 wrote:Minecraft username: tinyelf101

Why do i want to join: After i watched the video on youtube about this server i just had to come to this website to join it. And it looks like a lot of fun!

My traits and facts: Fact , I am good at building but bad at PVP. Fact , I am good at stopping a fight in chat so there will be no arguing. Trait , I am kind and sweet and never feeds a bully. Fact , I have never been banned from any server and never will be.

My favorite right: If Tiny, you have the right to carve a home within Spawnington, its sewers, or its various hovels, so 
long as the outward appearance of the aforementioned structures are not altered.

Official server currency: Cheese!



Can you pppplllleeeaasseee add me!  

Well, it seems no one glanced back here to offer you some constructive criticism, so… I might as well.

Anyway, first things first - I appreciate you not just saying you want to join just because of Gulliver’s mod, but… well, can you give me something more specific than just you watching one of several videos about our server? Something you look forward to actually doing on the server, perhaps?

And… here is where your quality really falls. You don’t explain how you stop fights in the chat - there are many ways to do so - and your skills in PvP are not in question - not that there is any skill to PvP, anyway, in my humble opinion. Also… uh… what’s with the trait thing? Just describe yourself here, don’t give me one measly fact. Especially so for your five…

Wait, where are your five random facts? All I see is one braggy fact about Minecraft. Random means ‘not video game-related’. Keep that in mind when you re-do your app.

Finally, try picking another Right/Responsibility, as that particular one is picked very, very, very often. Oh, and you got cheese right. *Throws confetti*

Anyway, Please re-do your app, paying attention to all my criticism if you please, and then you should be clear for whitelisting. Sorry for the delay. ^^

i am so sorry! that i'm wasting your time and space

i wish i could delete this

arg why can't i delete this!

why!? why?! i hate myself right now!

tacorits wrote:can i please skype with you guys becaus everytime i try to post my information something goes wrong and i have to start all over again

my skype name is tacorits or taco ritsema van eck and im dutch

Err yeaaaah right.

If your talking about posting and everything goes wrong and you need to start again... Don't make your app on the forums! Make your app on a different program or something so you can copy and paste your app here later!

Also don't make unnecessary posts please we don't want applications with holes in it.

my minecraft name is tacorits

why i want to join the server:
I want to join the server becauss, it sounds like a lot of fun and i want to make new friends, i don't care if there english or even japanese! as long as i can understand what there saying. the Gulliver mod plays a big part, you could say it's the main reasson. I like English servers Becauss it's my favorits language and i like the idea of being smal or HUGE! I like the fact that there are towns in the server for Tiny and large people. please excuse me but i could'nt think of more reassons

my traits skills and personality: well i am not bad at minecraft even if i do say so myself. I like to stay out of fights unless there for fun, and if the others wants to fight just for fun. I have played minecraft for four or three years now so i guess i could say i'm experienced. I am not that good at building, you may say something completly different. And i like to help people =).

Five random things:
>i am playing on my fathers computer
>i like drawing simplistic things that i show to anyone who's interested
>my favorite colors are yellow and orange
>in minecraft i look like a beaver
>i live in the netherlands

My favorite right is: If Tiny, you have the right to carve a home within Spawnington, its sewers, or its various hovels, so 
long as the outward appearance of the aforementioned structures are not altered

server curency: cheese and blue cheese =)

tacorits wrote:my minecraft name is tacorits

the reasson why i want to join the server is because i was looking for a minecraft server with the gulliver mod. When i saw this server i just wanted to join. the trailer is amazing and it seems like a fun server i love your motto "come for the features, stay for the fun" and that is exactly what i'm planning to do

my traits skills and personality: well i am not bad at minecraft even if i do say myself. I like to stay out of fights unless there for fun, and if the others wants to fight just for fun. I have played minecraft for four or three years now so i guess i could say i'm experienced. I am not that good at building, you may say something completly different. And i like to help people =).

Five random things:
>i am playing on my fathers computer
>i like drawing simplistic things that i show to anyone who's interested
>my favorite colors are yellow and orange
>in minecraft i look like a beaver
>i live in the netherlands

My favorite right is:If Tiny, you have the right to carve a home within Spawnington, its sewers, or its various hovels, so 
long as the outward appearance of the aforementioned structures are not altered

server curency: cheese and blue cheese =)

p.s. Your totally right but i did it anyways

Okay here we go...

Question 1: Correct

Question 2: What exactly in the trailer made you say? "Hey! I want to join this server!" It it the because you like how our dynmap looks? The players or the mod itself?

Question 3: Hmm so you try to keep out of fights and you like to help people eh? Well I think this answer is acceptable...

Question 4: Eep! I edited my review here we go

1 Not really random
2 Cool!
3 Not really random
4 Well why do you look like a beaver?
5 Ehm not really random...

Question 5: Correct (Wow another tiny)

Question 6: Correct

Formatting and Grammar: Okay well your Grammar is lacking on some points and before you give me the excuse "I'm Dutch" I say to you "I'm Dutch too" Everyone here on this server speaks English so I hope you can understand them good enough...

For your formatting... Could you add the question above your answer? Putting the question in bold won't hurt too...

Verdict: No not yet but I see potential, improve your answer to question 2 and 4 and improve your grammar and formatting... And I recommend choosing a different right (You don't need to but I recommend you do)

my minecraft name is tacorits

why i want to join the server:
I want to join the server becauss, it sounds like a lot of fun and i want to make new friends, i don't care if there english or even japanese! as long as i can understand what there saying. the Gulliver mod plays a big part, you could say it's the main reasson. I like English servers Becauss it's my favorits language and i like the idea of being smal or HUGE! I like the fact that there are towns in the server for Tiny and large people. Your sever sounds like fun and i would just want to discover what it is to play the gulliver mod with other people. And now i will repeat myself, But it sounds like fun, And that is everything i want out of a server. but it's probably still not that good of a reason and that makes me an idiot at explaning things but, that doesn't mean i don't have a good reason.

my traits skills and personality: well i am not bad at minecraft even if i do say so myself. I like to stay out of fights unless there for fun, and if the others wants to fight just for fun. I have played minecraft for four or three years now so i guess i could say i'm experienced. I am not that good at building, you may say something completly different. And i like to help people =).

Five random things:
>i like to hug people as a thank you.=)
>i like drawing simplistic things that i show to anyone who's interested.
>i love reading books that are very thick otherwise i finish it in one day and then i don't have as much reading material and i start getting bored.
>i made my own skin that is a new species on it's own i call it a beaverman you can put them in clothes and give them your own personality to turn them into a bully or a nice guy. =)
>i am twelve years old and i'm better at English than most other grown ups. (i am dutch if you didn't know so yeah.)

My favorite right is: You have the right to report, with evidence, any crimes committed against you or your property, or 
those belonging to a neighbor, Veteran player, or another Novice player

server curency: cheese and blue cheese =)

(yes i'm dutch and yes i can understand what your saying just fine.)

What a shame that he still won't change that right in question #5. If only he knew what that implied. XD

Oh well, he'll find that out the hard way eventually.

tacorits wrote:my minecraft name is tacorits

why i want to join the server:
I want to join the server becauss, it sounds like a lot of fun and i want to make new friends, i don't care if there english or even japanese! as long as i can understand what there saying. the Gulliver mod plays a big part, you could say it's the main reasson. I like English servers Becauss it's my favorits language and i like the idea of being smal or HUGE! I like the fact that there are towns in the server for Tiny and large people. please excuse me but i could'nt think of more reassons why i want to join the server.

my traits skills and personality: well i am not bad at minecraft even if i do say so myself. I like to stay out of fights unless there for fun, and if the others wants to fight just for fun. I have played minecraft for four or three years now so i guess i could say i'm experienced. I am not that good at building, you may say something completly different. And i like to help people =).

Five random things:
>i am playing on my fathers computer
>i like drawing simplistic things that i show to anyone who's interested
>my favorite colors are yellow and orange
>in minecraft i look like a beaver
>i live in the netherlands

My favorite right is: If Tiny, you have the right to carve a home within Spawnington, its sewers, or its various hovels, so
long as the outward appearance of the aforementioned structures are not altered

server curency: cheese and blue cheese =)

Hello Taco lets try again,

Question 2: I only want to know the reasons why you want to join the server NOT that you don't know of more reasons also if you like English server... There are millions of other English severs Please try to give me more reasons.

Question 4: You didn't change anything... We want random facts about YOU make the facts sentences long please, the only fact I (barely) accept is your second one.

Question 5: I recommended you to choose another right... (You don't need but I recommend you to do it.)

Formatting and Grammar: Your grammar isn't the best around here... I recommend using a spell checker and to do some research about how to spell some words (Googling the English word also helps!)

Verdict: No not yet LISTEN to my feedback and improve your app if you want to join the server.

my minecraft name is tacorits

why i want to join the server:
I want to join the server becauss, it sounds like a lot of fun and i want to make new friends, i don't care if there english or even japanese! as long as i can understand what there saying. the Gulliver mod plays a big part, you could say it's the main reasson. I like English servers Becauss it's my favorits language and i like the idea of being smal or HUGE! I like the fact that there are towns in the server for Tiny and large people. Your sever sounds like fun and i would just want to discover what it is to play the gulliver mod with other people. And now i will repeat myself, But it sounds like fun, And that is everything i want out of a server. but it's probably still not that good of a reason and that makes me an idiot at explaning things but, that doesn't mean i don't have a good reason.

my traits skills and personality: well i am not bad at minecraft even if i do say so myself. I like to stay out of fights unless there for fun, and if the others wants to fight just for fun. I have played minecraft for four or three years now so i guess i could say i'm experienced. I am not that good at building, you may say something completly different. And i like to help people =).

Five random things:
>i like to hug people as a thank you.=)
>i like drawing simplistic things that i show to anyone who's interested.
>i love reading books that are very thick otherwise i finish it in one day and then i don't have as much reading material and i start getting bored.
>i made my own skin that is a new species on it's own i call it a beaverman you can put them in clothes and give them your own personality to turn them into a bully or a nice guy. =)
>i am twelve years old and i'm better at English than most other grown ups. (i am dutch if you didn't know so yeah.)

My favorite right is: You have the right to report, with evidence, any crimes committed against you or your property, or
those belonging to a neighbor, Veteran player, or another Novice player

server curency: cheese and blue cheese =)

(yes i'm dutch and yes i can understand what your saying just fine.)

pls write whitelist name: ONBASIYUSUF

BALANCE wrote:pls write whitelist name: ONBASIYUSUF

Make a real app if you want to join the server...

tacorits wrote:my minecraft name is tacorits

why i want to join the server:
I want to join the server becauss, it sounds like a lot of fun and i want to make new friends, i don't care if there english or even japanese! as long as i can understand what there saying. the Gulliver mod plays a big part, you could say it's the main reasson. I like English servers Becauss it's my favorits language and i like the idea of being smal or HUGE! I like the fact that there are towns in the server for Tiny and large people. Your sever sounds like fun and i would just want to discover what it is to play the gulliver mod with other people. And now i will repeat myself, But it sounds like fun, And that is everything i want out of a server. but it's probably still not that good of a reason and that makes me an idiot at explaning things but, that doesn't mean i don't have a good reason.

my traits skills and personality: well i am not bad at minecraft even if i do say so myself. I like to stay out of fights unless there for fun, and if the others wants to fight just for fun. I have played minecraft for four or three years now so i guess i could say i'm experienced. I am not that good at building, you may say something completly different. And i like to help people =).

Five random things:
>i like to hug people as a thank you.=)
>i like drawing simplistic things that i show to anyone who's interested.
>i love reading books that are very thick otherwise i finish it in one day and then i don't have as much reading material and i start getting bored.
>i made my own skin that is a new species on it's own i call it a beaverman you can put them in clothes and give them your own personality to turn them into a bully or a nice guy. =)
>i am twelve years old and i'm better at English than most other grown ups. (i am dutch if you didn't know so yeah.)

My favorite right is: You have the right to report, with evidence, any crimes committed against you or your property, or
those belonging to a neighbor, Veteran player, or another Novice player

server curency: cheese and blue cheese =)

(yes i'm dutch and yes i can understand what your saying just fine.)

Hey Taco! Lets get to the review

Question 2: Hmm well there are cool people around here I'm sure you'll make some friends ^^

Question 4: Whoa you actually did pretty good here! Also beavermans sound interesting... Why don't you make a beaver themed town on the server?

Question 5: Yay! A cool awesome right ^^

Grammar formatting: Well your grammar and formatting is still not the best... But I would expect that from someone who doesn't speak English...

Verdict: Well you did do better... And I'm going to whitelist you!

BUT I'll keep an eye on you, and I hope you train your English better (Maybe some people on the server will help you )

I'm not sure if this is where I make my applications but here it is:

1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?

My Minecraft user name is Masterhand_X I got the name from one of my favorite Nintendo games: Super Smash Brothers Brawl. Masterhand was an end game boss.

2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.

I have never played on any servers associated with this one, in fact I’ve never had experience playing on a server with the Gulliver mod, that is the honest reason I’d like to apply for white list, I have never played on a Gulliver modded server before and I look forward to inviting my friends to join me.

3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.

In general, I’m usually a nice guy, I enjoy building and survival but most of all team work, I often find myself helping people just because they need help. On the flip side I’m going to be honest and say that I often was angered easily in the past but that was playing factions, I believe this server will be a little bit more peaceful. I don't have a schedule for when I'm going to be online but when I am online, I just want to have fun (NOT at the expense of others but to join in the beautiful community that has been created).

4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.

-I consider myself an expert at Minecraft potion brewing; I've memorized almost (if not all) potions you can brew in Minecraft
-I am a war veteran of Minecraft factions (I defeated the enemy leader in the faction war).
-In real life, I enjoy playing Nintendo games such as Legend of Zelda but I enjoy going outside too much.
-I am 16 years old in High School.
-I am a life rank in Boy Scouts.

5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.

Right #13 "You have the right to report, with evidence, any crimes committed against you or your property, or those belonging to a neighbor, Veteran player, or another Novice player."



6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide  please write down the name of the official server currency.

Cheese

-This is my first application I've ever made for anything so I'll try to clean it up if it's not complete.
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Masterhand_X wrote:I'm not sure if this is where I make my applications but here it is:

1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?

My Minecraft user name is Masterhand_X I got the name from one of my favorite Nintendo games: Super Smash Brothers Brawl. Masterhand was an end game boss.

2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.

I have never played on any servers associated with this one, in fact I’ve never had experience playing on a server with the Gulliver mod, that is the honest reason I’d like to apply for white list, I have never played on a Gulliver modded server before and I look forward to inviting my friends to join me.

3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.

In general, I’m usually a nice guy, I enjoy building and survival but most of all team work, I often find myself helping people just because they need help. On the flip side I’m going to be honest and say that I often was angered easily in the past but that was playing factions, I believe this server will be a little bit more peaceful. I don't have a schedule for when I'm going to be online but when I am online, I just want to have fun (NOT at the expense of others but to join in the beautiful community that has been created).

4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.

-I consider myself an expert at Minecraft potion brewing; I've memorized almost (if not all) potions you can brew in Minecraft
-I am a war veteran of Minecraft factions (I defeated the enemy leader in the faction war).
-In real life, I enjoy playing Nintendo games such as Legend of Zelda but I enjoy going outside too much.
-I am 16 years old in High School.
-I am a life rank in Boy Scouts.

5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.

Right #13 "You have the right to report, with evidence, any crimes committed against you or your property, or those belonging to a neighbor, Veteran player, or another Novice player."



6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide  please write down the name of the official server currency.

Cheese

-This is my first application I've ever made for anything so I'll try to clean it up if it's not complete.
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*Glances at the forum title, and at the last dozen or so pages of whitelist apps*

I dunno, man, but this looks like the kind of place you'd apply for a whitelist.

Quite frankly stupid questions aside, Let's move onto your actual app... which isn't much better. For one, your answer to question two (I don't typically review question number one...) is... well, there's definitely not enough to it. Yeah, we're a gulliver server, but we offer more than that - and there will undoubtedly be more gulliver servers out there. If another server should pop up, what will keep you coming to our server? We have a number of youtube videos, plus the information on this forum.

As for your third question, you say you're 'usually' a nice guy, and you get 'angry easily'. Needless to say, on a relatively peaceful building server that's more focused on exploration and construction than destruction, these are not good things to say about yourself - but I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt, as you outright admitted it, and few people can play competitive gamemodes like Factions and not get upset. You should see me try playing Call of Duty...

Unfortunately, though, your five random facts aren't all that random... or rather, not random in the sense that we're looking for. This section is meant to show more of your character, so we're not interested in anything Minecraft-related, and preferably nothing about gaming (unless you want to mention you barely game, or game too much, as that helps us understand your character more). Thus, your first and second facts are rendered null, your third fact is alright, and your fifth fact... uh... I'll be frank - I'm not, and haven't, been in boy scouts. What's a 'life rank'?

Moving onto the easiest part of the app, you've picked a very nice Right that I've rarely seen, and quoted it neatly. Congrats ^^

And finally, yes, cheese is the answer.

So, I can't whitelist you just yet. Look through my critiquing, see if you can edit new stuff and clarify old things in your application, and then make a new post with the new app, please ^^

Good luck!

1) What is your Minecraft username (or "IGN")?
Please don't forget this as we won't know how to whitelist you on the server.
For security reasons, we cannot assume your forum username is equal to your Minecraft one.

monsterslayer58

2) Please explain why you would like to join the Server.
We are looking for a detailed and honest explanation, ideally between 60 to 90 words.  Focus on your reasons for joining our server specifically over other server options (such as whether you like our documentation, our server videos, or our Dynmap), but you can also include such things as how you heard about this server, how you were acquainted with UncleMion's Gulliver Mod, and if you have had any experience in prior Gulliver servers.

I would like to join your server because I have seen videos showing what it looks like and I think its amazing. I have never been on a Gulliver server before but I think it would amazing to go around with other people with other people that are different heights. I'm usually on from 3 pm to 9 and i'm usually looking for good servers and this one stuck out because its the first server to do Gullivers that I've seen.

3) Please explain how your talents, skills, experience, personality traits, and aspirations can help contribute positively to our server.
You are free to be a little broad here since you have likely never been to our server and don't know how we're like.  But your goal here is to demonstrate, ideally between 60 to 90 words, how you expect to do your part to help keep our server a happy, peaceful and productive place.  Things like maturity, building cred, and an independent spirit are valuable to us, but you're more than welcomed to be creative here.

I'm really good at coming up with things to do when there's absolutely nothing to do. But the things I come up with usually involve building and that i'm not good at   . Since i'm not good at building i'm very good at gathering resources. I'm also very mature and do not grief and if i see griefing I will report it. I'm very good at following rules (which is why i can build at all lol).

4) Please list five random facts about yourself that can help differentiate you from other players.
It can be very easy to rinse and repeat the same answers from the previous two questions, so here is your chance to truly differentiate yourself from other players.  List five amazing facts about yourself that make you special or that may be of interest to someone in our community.  Be sure to write detailed responses in full sentences, and bulletined-out to make it easier for us to read.

1) I own a pit-bull who is very cute but sheds to much and has something stuck in her.
2) I have a box full of books that are all mystery or fantasy.
3) I have gotten very good at modding but not making servers.
4) Most of my time spent on creative worlds is setting up a fake tardis from Dr.Who.
5) I am very small and can hide where a normal sized person for my age (11 going 12) can't.

5) To ensure you understand your rights and responsibilities on our server, please read the Novice's Creed, and write down one right or responsibility that you enjoy the most.
Feel free to copy and paste it here, or paraphrase it from memory.  The most important thing to demonstrate is that you opened the document and read enough of it to pick one of the rights or responsibilities listed.  What you picked may be used to assess your personality, so choose wisely and feel free to explain your choice if you want.

If held or kidnapped by a Giant player against your will, or attacked by a PvP­obsessed player, you 
have the right to protest the act or defend yourself if necessary. I mainly choose this one because of the pvp obsessed one because i don't think anyone on this server would do that for no reason.

6) And finally, to confirm that you read the Big Sister Server Quick Guide  please write down the name of the official server currency.
Again, we just need to make sure you opened the guide and can find the answer to this very simple question.

"Cheese" is the official server currency, and cheese blocks (aka sponges) or blue cheese blocks (aka lapis lazuli blocks) are the official physical currency denominations.  These can be deposited or withdrawn from any Cheese ATM with no exchange rate. Yes i did read it but I thought this would be faster.

EDIT: The video I said earlier is

Please Write Whitelist No Bugs No Hacks No Floods Please Write Name: ONBASIYUSUF Age: 9.5 Please Write (

Write no BALANCE writee Minecraft Nick: ONBASIYUSUF!

BALANCE wrote:Please Write Whitelist No Bugs No Hacks No Floods Please Write             Name: ONBASIYUSUF Age: 9.5  Please Write (

BALANCE wrote:Write no BALANCE writee Minecraft Nick: ONBASIYUSUF!

Err yeah right I think you should find another server instead of spamming this thread and posting odd messages on my profile wall...