Whitelist Applications - Archive 2

no prob

1. Hi my ign is Orkho

2. After I watched the trailer for this server after I downloaded the mod, it really got me wanting to join it and meet a lot of nice people and play games with other people and if I make any friends then it would be 1000% times more better, even if I get one friend still 1000% better, so this server might be a really good server for me and a lot more people to join.

3. I got a good mining talent, I like mining so I can get a lot of materials so I can get stronger, I got a experience of helping people who need materials that I have, I got a roleplaying, nice,curious, and humor personality traits and i'm easily entertained at some funny things that might happen, and i have no aspirations.

4. One, playing with my friends in real life, two, roleplaying with my friends on skype so i have something to do, three, making new friends at every school or games i go on, four, playing games with everyone I know and like, five, making everyone happy with my voice and telling them funny stories and things i did.

5. "You have the right to harvest wood or public crops, so long as you replant these."

6. The currency is cheese.

Heh. I don't remember the currency being bread.

aw i knew i should have put cheese :c

ima fix that

Yeah, it's always cheese.

gotta luv cheese

now i fixed it

can i please be re-whitelisted i spent 5 months getting it to work i passed before please i wont disappoint

Orkho's application:

I can finally review your application properly now.
Hello, I'm Hannah and I'm going to be your reviewer tonight. Good luck.

Question 2: Lovely anwser. I'm glad you watched the trailer and that got you into the mod. You'll meet some very nice people here, it's a very friendly community on this server. I'm sure you will make lots of friends. What made you like this mod - by the way?

Question 3: I have to be honest here and say this feels a bit rushed, it kind of goes from one thing to the next. Almost like a list. Anyway, mining is a nice hobby to have as it's a relaxing and adventurous journey, hehe I envision you mining already. xP It's good to have helpful people on this server like that, and if you like roleplaying you will love this because lots of rp's happen here. A really nice personality. ^^ And I'm sorry to hear you don't have any aspirations

Question 4: Please bullet point these next time, it'll make it much clearer for us to read.
A: ? I'm confused, what does this suggest?
B: This has got to be about you.
C: I'm seeing a pattern here, these need to make you unique and different from other players, try to make them a little more interesting.

Question 5: Unusual choice but correct. Can you explain your answer?

Question 6: Correct

Verdict: I cannot recommend you to this server yet. Follow up what I have said and repost - question 2, 3, 4, 5 need to be modified a little.

so next time i have to work on it?

Yes, and repost

ok so right now or later?

Whenever you feel ready to. Take your time.

kk ^^ you are nice

Hannah, can you tell me why i need to modify question 3

@Orkho
Right - It needs to be about 20% cooler. [j/k] There appear to be a lot of commas in question 3: Make these into real sentences. It will help.

kk

Barlean3 wrote:can i please be re-whitelisted i spent 5 months getting it to work i passed before please i wont disappoint

Okay, can you confirm your mine craft id?

im so scared after i post my application

1. Hi my ign is Orkho

2. After I watched the trailer for this server after I downloaded the mod, it really got me wanting to join it and meet a lot of nice people and play games with other people and if I make any friends then it would be 1000% times more better, even if I get one friend still 1000% better, so this server might be a really good server for me and a lot more people to join. I tried to get the mod for a long time and now i got it and i wanted to know if their was any servers with it and this one is the best one i been hearing about.

3. I got a good mining talent and I like mining so I can get a lot of materials so I can get stronger and I got a experience of helping people who need materials that I have, I got a roleplaying, nice,curious, and humor personality traits and i'm easily entertained at some funny things that might happen and i have no aspirations.

4. One, playing with my friends in real life
two, roleplaying with my friends on skype so i have something to do
three, making new friends at every school or games i go on
four, playing games with everyone I know and like
five, making everyone happy with my voice and telling them funny stories and things i did.

5. "You have the right to harvest wood or public crops, so long as you replant these." I like this because wood is good for building and crops can help us feed are self's.

6. The currency is cheese.

Orkho wrote:im so scared after i post my application

So long as you do a good job and follow instructions, you don't have anything to be scared about.

im still scared i have a scared feeling right now

Hello there again, it's Hannah

You know, when I first applied I was scared too. I was afraid of being failed and that stuff, in my first try, my formatting was awful, I felt guilty that I should've done better, then when it was reviewed, I was failed. In my next attempt, I made a massive turnaround, and I got in. My hands were no longer shaking and I was so happy that I had gotten in. Maybe the same will happen to you...

I'll go ahead and review your application shortly.. ^^

kk you making me feel better now